Very nicely done. Cuddles.

you're stories always make me feel all kind of emotions. I have yet to find another writer to do it so well. I am happy to see you are still writing since a lot of the authors here have stoped. There are few really good fanfics. And trust me I have read a lot of the :))))

Have you evere tried writing inuyasha fan fic ?

Melissa, you don't suck at endings. I feel like I have to say it a million times over. You're always good with them. Dude, you do a great job. You did another great story. It was so sweet.

Sweet, sappy and wonderful.

Heartwarming... that's the only word that I can currently think of after reading this. Well done.

OH YEEESS!
Damn you always manage to put so many smiles in my face. I always love to see their story through your eyes. It had a touch of sweetness and love. Or it’s my brain seeing love everywhere xD. I do like the idea of them living on their own little home outside of Konoha. I think it would have been this way if they happened to be canon. My favorit part is without surprise, Sasuke bringing the children’s home. Damn he was cute and sexy. I have a soft spot for daddy Sasuke.
Thank you so much Chee!

Wonderful, such a nice ending. When Sasuke brought the children I couldn't help but smile and she'd a few tears. He was fulfilling a need for family he was probably wanting subconsciously and I know he and Naruto will be excellent parents. I loved it, great job!

That was everything that I didn’t know I needed! I had to reread the first chapter so I could remember where we left off. The flow was perfect. This is the way the show should have ended. I’m sure most fan girls agree. Thanks for updating! It’s better late than never right?

Happy New Year 2019. And this should be the ending for Naruto. Thank You so muchhhhhhh

-wipes away happy tears- that was beautiful Melissa-sama! Happy New Year!

Aww, this started off sad, then turned cute, then sad again. How do you play with my emotions like this in one chapter? I am very intrigued with this and am looking forward to more. More specifically how you write Sasuke and Naruto's reunion and thereafter.

Enjoying the story so far

I always like reading you and reading your take on Naruto’s life. Yeah seeing the manga we know what happened. But we were not inside his head. It’s so sad for a little boy to no know his own birthday. It shouldn’t happen. Thought, with Sasuke there, he was able to get a taste of some happiness. There is still load of work to do, shippuden time haven’t started yet. I’m curious to see what you will be doing!

Thank you Chee!

That was kind of sweet :)

I was hooked from beginning until the end. I’m so eager to see how you will mold the next chapter. Great job at drawing us in!