| Reviews for Off the Path |
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UkeYugixSemeYami15 chapter 17 . 9/23/2019 Can’t wait for more |
Nani chapter 17 . 9/11/2019 Wow, I can't believe this is the end of the 2nd trilogy. I am glad you're having so much fun with it! But it is understandable you have to take a break. I am so anxious what happens next but I can wait. About the chapter, I am worried about Lt. Surge mental state, and I hope he is ok. I am glad Koga finally said something to Ash since Ash always been reckless and I hope it do some good of him to stopping hurting himself in these dangerous situations. Blaine is the MVP of him taking down walls and security systems lol. I am excited as well what will come in the future |
Guest chapter 17 . 9/8/2019 Hey I love this story update please |
griffin blackwood chapter 17 . 9/7/2019 Excellent work! |
Nani chapter 16 . 8/20/2019 Wow, I did not expect this to be honest.I really liked the build up you had with Pikachu evolving. I really loving the fact you taken your own liberties how you been handling the story which is why I been personally enjoying it a lot. |
OC-Trainer-Gray chapter 16 . 8/20/2019 Is Pikashunium-Z gonna still be a thing, or not? Man, I can feel some the emotions Pikachu/Raichu went through to do this. |
thor94 chapter 16 . 8/19/2019 interesting and touching chapter. And good way to bring pikachu evolution. so the mysterious psychic was lugia. |
griffin blackwood chapter 16 . 8/19/2019 Quite the twists loaded into one chapter. Good jov |
Nani chapter 15 . 8/4/2019 I wasn't expecting this twist to be honest. I have an idea where you going with this and this made me feel so giddy of excitement for the what's coming on the next chapter! |
griffin blackwood chapter 15 . 7/30/2019 Good job |
Gundam Wing Zero chapter 8 . 6/12/2019 Again you make many of the characters feel like people with there own problems, this chapter does a great job in exploring this. Also with Ash preparing for the fight with Mewtwo. |
DRIVER Z chapter 13 . 6/6/2019 I NEED MORE OF THIS UPDATE FASTER! WRITE MORE POKEMON STORIES ! |
Rod chapter 13 . 6/6/2019 I like your writing style. Keep it up! |
SliverA chapter 12 . 5/29/2019 Dude you need give Ash Vaporeon. it's so underrated. He need number 7 and get him a girl that's not misty. |
Korrina chapter 13 . 5/29/2019 You're still at it! :D I'm so happy! |