Dang, that was hot! Hehehe. Poor Bowsette's so emotional... but that's understandable given the circumstances.

Awww, Bowser has a really sad backstory. And Peach is so mean! :/ I thought it was funny that the Koopa Kid pleaded for Mario to spare its life, lol.

Dont you mean cloud Sixty-Nine

Wait is it gay cuz if mario seeing a big titty girl he thinks is hotmbut he knows its his homie, who is a boy would he stiall have THE BIG GAY?

Oh that was great, couldn't help but feel on edge through their whole discussion. I can only try to imagine what happens now.. especially with that startling revelelation. Haha. Great work as alwaya

Ah now that's setting up to be a tense meeting... I can't even imagine how that conversation is going to play out, haha. Can't wait for more

well the next chapter ought to be interesting.
also, i recommend going over your chapter 1 last time before posting it. there were some gramatical errors that could be fixed from just rereading. or find a beta, either works really.
aside from that, all good.

Oh wow, this is definitely an interesting take on the dynamic between Mario and Bowser. Setting aside their rivalry and finding friendship before donning the crown. And of course that twist at the end, Bowsette reluctant to go further or risk 'losing' herself. I'm definitely curious to see where it goes from here

Nice smut, but that light angsty ending hurt (so it did its job!)

a bit too fast paced, and quite a lot of incorrectly spelled words. I recomend using Mword or grammerly to sort out the grammar mistakes. Also brain storm a bit for what results you want. If ya want them to do something big, like this chapter, drag it out a bit. don't just smash everything together. reading should be an adventure, don't give us just the destination.

I'll stick around for a few more chapters, here's to hoping you make something great.

Good but there's a few typos throughout.

I like it alot..

woo some really good stuff. ha e nothing much to add other than I would like to read more.