Reviews for Life on the Rise
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story please finish the story I like the story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story
CRB chapter 13 . 6/23
Oh now that was very satisfying! Can’t wait to see Laura play baseball.

Also very glad my doctor never told me he thought it was impossible for me to ever hit the ball (due to supposedly a depth perception problem?) until after I’d been playing for two years and hitting the ball just fine :-)
respectthetruth chapter 1 . 6/3
Beware the author Bohogal1998. She does not respect the readers, the reviewers, or most others. She is combative and accusing of others when they have done nothing wrong. She mocks and acts superior when people disagree with her or point out errors in her writing or thinking. Avoid her inferior works; there are plenty of others to read who are much better writers. Avoid interaction with her at all costs.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story please finish the story
Scousedancer chapter 13 . 5/14
Can I just say how happy this story makes me? I adore the joy & happiness of this lovely family Harm & Mac have built. Love AJ's teaching Laura to bat, he's so good with kids, for all he's so gruff sonetimes
Guest chapter 13 . 4/30
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story
Annarita chapter 13 . 4/30
Finally catching up with this story. I love these beautiful family moments that they should have had!
Martha Songer chapter 13 . 4/29
Happy to see the admiral show up! So excited that he helped Laura achieve her goal! Keep writing! You’re very talented!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29
And somebody remembers that AJ KNOWS baseball. Enjoying this story, especially the part about the sisters or cousins part of Shannon and Ellie.
J chapter 13 . 4/29
Loved this chapter and sums up Laura's determination and willingness to listen and learn
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29
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Play Ball! I cheered right along side Mac (even a small tear). Love Mr A.J. and his help. Can’t wait to see more of my favorite family!

Thank you
Steamboat chapter 13 . 4/29
What a delightful chapter! I thought "Coach" Chegwidden might come through with some excellent coaching!
Martha Songer chapter 12 . 4/28
I love your writing. I’ve been eagerly awaiting this next chapter! Hope you and yours are well!
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