Nice. This was brilliant, and seriously... Harry SHOULD have done this in canon. But you know... you did a great job.

Sincerely,
Miriam

So poor Cedric still dies.. But so many live if Harry had just done this. Well done

This is a very good lil flick.
:))

Good fic

That was good, it deserves a follow up.

Now that is a creative way to use the life debt. Very well done! Pity you didn't add a second chapter, Fudge's reaction to Pettigrew marching into the DMLE and dropping Lord Thingy off would have been quite amusing. It's a bit hard to deny his return when he's dropped practically into your lap, right? ;-)

This was awesome and I would have loved to read the outcome.

Well, I do believe that the cause of Peter's death in the last book was his silver hand, not a magical connection to Harry. When Voldemort gives Peter the silver hand, he says "may your loyalty waver again", and once it does (because Harry reminds him of the life debt, and Peter hesitates to hurt him and the others), Peter's strangled by the hand. So if this is an attempt to mock the books'/Harry's logic, I don't really think it worked.

I kind of like the story anyway, though. This is one of my favourite scenes in the books. It's always nice to see it reimagined in different ways, and this is something I haven't seen before! :)

Stop making sense, you're making Rowling look stupid!

Which is why I'm enjoying these one-shots.

You are spectacularly good at coming up with shorts that I really want to be longer.

nice

Excellent

Fascinating idea. I can only imagine how it all would have played out.

xx- Kudos -xx : )

ça n'a pas l'air d'être fini!
mais bonne réaction pour harry!