| Reviews for A Behemoth |
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   bellapom chapter 5 . 9/12/2019 Good story |
| ImploringIdeal chapter 5 . 8/26/2019 Interesting fic. I'm curious to see where you go with it. Hope you can update soon! |
| levi.hall.9279 chapter 5 . 8/6/2019 Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I am eager to see what you are gonna do next |
| Qorianth Grindelwald chapter 5 . 8/6/2019 Uh my, in deed... |
| a.vago chapter 4 . 8/4/2019 Astounding how fast, master Harry is adapting: hyperspace nullifier super weapon... For one, if I had been Mr Potter, I would have to ask what hyperspace is... |
| monkiepawn chapter 2 . 8/1/2019 I always hated that from Potter universe. What's the point of having magic if it's not accessible without a focus? How did they even created a focus if they couldn't do magic without it! A soldier and even a warrior is not one trick ponny to have his weapon taken away and become useless. I hope this 750 years old man Harry no some wandless magic as well as use that age wisdom. |
| vindictive Glory chapter 2 . 7/30/2019 damn that brings back some lv memories, nice cliffie. |
| vindictive Glory chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 at first you mention that his 25, then 15, despite tht its a good read. |
| goblin81 chapter 5 . 7/29/2019 Looking forward to seeing Harry's journey. |
| iTEX chapter 1 . 7/28/2019 Like the idea but you desperately need a beta. |
| deathwearsblack chapter 6 . 7/27/2019 please update. |
| myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 7/26/2019 What just happened |
| myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 Interesting first chapter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2019 Epic idea, but you need a beta or partner-writer to go from outline to sentences on page. Its rough, word choice is often disruptive to the flow of the story, there is too much exposition/speaking/internal dialogue and nearly no descriptions of other senses (sight, sound, smell, heat, emotion, noise that's not dialogue), and feels extremely rushed/forced by writer rather than a character bulldozing thru and rushing the other characters along. Epic idea. And still, mad props for taking time to put words on a page and the courage to post it for the world to see. Cant get better if you never try. |
| BoredKing chapter 6 . 7/24/2019 "between the living, living and the non-living and between the non-living" I don't think I need to point the error out. Interesting story so far. |
