Hi, I think that Harry and Hope are just Precious! I hope you are better or back to health now and that you can keep writing, as it sounds like it is something you really like :)

uhm... what was the point with this chapter?
it seem to be taken straight out of the book. Awfully boring. Didn't bring your story anywhere...

Feel better soon

Oooo! Excited for everything that hoi just outlined that's coming. (And I hope you're feeling better!)

This is definitely a tricky one, especially with Marcy in the middle of it. I think you really nailed both Harry and Hermione!

Figure hermione would be better than that.

Ron I’m not surprised

Great chapter as per norm even though it was a bit short be seeing as you have been poorly i will let you off lol. Hope your feeling better and getting there ?. I do hope doznt take any crap from molly and the rest come to think about it ? Look forward to the next chapter to come.

Nice to see this story update! I cant wait to see Mrs weasly lose the plot! I was hoping Harry would say it was his child rather than he adopted her but ah well cant have it all go my way hhaha. Hope your feeling better now that your out of hospital and i cant wait to read more!

I love your story so far! I am so excited for Ron and hermione to meet hope! Please update soon!

interesting... how's this going to pan out?!

I love this new chapter!

Fantastic chapter!

Funny. Especially Ron getting whomped on by a muggle & a diaper bag. If the twins get hold of that info. Maybe that should be when, not if. Marcy's habit of beating on people whenever needs to come to a halt. So now Ron & Hermione know! Can't wait for the reaction.

I love this chapter. And I cant wait to see the next.

I wouldn’t make it slash that’s just my opinion and if you prefer it to be slash that’s fine but honestly I’d feel it would ruin it instead how about you have Harry be with no one make him raise hope as a single father maybe

wow thank god they are good now
please do continue
bye sumi