Aww, good choice, Peter. He and Davy have terrible luck with the ladies in your stories! I like how you pulled in his add and the prediction to weave all if your stories together. And you did a great job with the changing points of view and timelines. The transitions were really good, and I liked how they had a consistency between each flash back. Great job! I'm considering this my birthday story ;)

Yay, the Calvary arrived! That was a pretty intense fight this chapter, a little reminiscent of real life :/ I thought Davy and Peter might reenact their physical altercation

"You guys realize how incredibly codependent you are, right?"

"So?" the four guys answered in unison.

A lot of good moments so far! The meeting with Davy, Micky and Mike in this chapter was perfect, I could see it like it was part of the show. Now I'm wondering where Micky and Davy are?

Geez, what a bridezilla! Poor Peter.

"Now I'm not the kind of guy to be rudely barging in on a matrimonial occasion, I'm not Micky and Davy." Sounds like something Mike would say, lol!

Another great story! :)

Grear story as usual. :) Honestly I'm grumpy that no one ever listens to Mike. Mike is literally always right. 10/10.