Hmm

This story is one I hope we will see an update of eventually its honestly really good.

Saddens me how you're rewriting this I was enjoying the original and seeing how this one has seemingly died I'm even more sad

Well, not as bad as I thought it would be.

I'm talking about the rewrite itself, not the quality of the story. :) The quality is great! I just normally have a disdain for rewrites because most of the time they only make small changes to the rewritten chapters... so far these haven't been radically different but they have enough of a change to the content for me to thoroughly enjoy this "different route". :)

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.

The only thing I don't like about this is that it's a rewrite. lol Just re-reading everything over again to try and pick out any key differences...

Other than that, I LOVE this story! I love the concept behind it! :) So I am very much looking forward to seeing just how it differentiates itself from it's older brother.

MOAR

I just finished reading the previous iteration of this story, and decided to post my review for both here. I really enjoyed the concept of Taylor as a Zanpaktou forge, and the three you had chosen to be represented were well executed in both power sets and the characters behind them. The idea of the emotional impacts of her life being the seed behind the creation of specific Zanpaktou's is incredibly interesting. The action scenes were exciting to read and Taylor's characterization (and the explanation behind her traits) was well done. If I had discovered your work earlier, I would have petitioned for the usage of Wabisuke, because it's a deceptively simple power which could be used to devastating effects, and Sakanade, mostly because I love Shinji and would like to see him as a character. I really hope you've been having a good year, and I look forward to any future writings you may produce. Thank you very much for this story.

I like the concept.

MOOOOOOOAAAAARRRRRR!

I feel like "Good and Bad" it an interesting view to take. We see it sort of approached with Soul Society before Aizen goes all pure evil. Seretei is "Heaven" and most of it is a crappy place with rape and violence. Zaraki you could argue is one of the best Soul Reapers since he travels and cuts down violent monsters in the 99 districts. You could also argue he's a monster himself for doing so. I don't view any of the "Good" captains as bad guys, but it wouldn't be hard to do so. They fight for a system that openly masacres anything they decide aren't normal. Bounto, Kon's race, um, the spirit arrow guys whose name escapes me at this second ((It's been awhile since I've read or watched Bleach.))

So it's an interesting fandom to cross with Worm. After all, as you mentioned a sword is a tool made for killing, it's not a shovel, or a knife, it is meant to end an opponent as quickly as possible. You could argue that as soon as they went to victimize someone else they gave up their rights to any protection. They might have beaten that guy to death or done other worse things to him. Cutting them down.

huh. interesting.

aha, nice

Hopefully, you'll return to this one, because this new coat of paint feels awesome, and it would be a shame to never get a new portion of it.

I read the original and very liked it. Although I admit it was a bit... flat.
This here feels much more substantial. I like it very much, and I hope you will continue with it.

You know, thank you for being honest and saying wether or not this fix is going to be finished or not.
Not many do that, and it gets difficult to determine whether or not a fic will continue.
So thank you for at least warning us that this might be abandoned.