| Reviews for The Queen of the galaxy |
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Black Gold Saya chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 This sentence 'The knight yelled as the warlord poker her crown before nodding as the knight raised his blade which fired a blue blast of of light from the blade' needs commas. Think about some descriptors- 'The knight yelled with all the rage and hate of his being at the warlord, who only nodded smugly back as the knight raised his weapon, and fired a blast of blue light at Bowsette' |