Sad to see you gave up.

Oh wow. I love this story! You've done a really great job with character and plot development. I think this is a very accurate portrayal of what might've happened if McGonagall had delivered Harry's letter and his abuse was more than depicted in canon. I really like the obscurus storyline... it's not been done much or if it has, never seems quite right. I think you've developed it brilliantly, especially as we don't know much about them in canon wizarding world. I like that Harry is reluctant to use magic so as to not lose a part of him. I'm very interested in seeing how that plays out. I also love your professors... and the relationships Harry is developing with them, even Snape. I'm glad he's able to start seeing past his looks and at least trying. Though I sorta wish Harry called McGonagall something other than just Aunt McGonagall, more familiar. I just LOVE Tonks, so glad you brought her in too. I wonder who you have planned for the harem, and how the professors will feel about it. In your world, are multiple relationships normal? Looking forward to finding out. Would love to see it as Susan, Tonks, Hermione, and Daphne. I also hope Harry gets to stay with McG or maybe the Tonks family.

Anyway, I apologize for not reviewing the previous chapters, but I just bingeread right through. I hope you find inspiration to continue this fantastic story! I'm off to see what else you've got written... cheers!

Hey I am interested in the story you are writing here, I am a long time fan of good fanfiction and this is one of the best original ideas I have read in a while, I hope you keep writing but if not on this one just know that at least one person has been inspired by your work here

Not to mention that Clarence is a Dumbledore.

Vernon you fat slob! There is no such thing as a poisonous snake! They are either venomous or non-venomous. And the Boa Constrictor is placed in the later category!

Sorry about that. I really enjoyed it when Minerva slipped into her Scottish accent. That means she's really p!**ed. You don't mess with her kittens. And I hope Dudley will not be sent Marge the Barge.

Great story! Please post more soon!

Hard to imagine he’s an Obscurial yet it never flattened the Durseleys

I have just power-read the entire story thus far...and I am hooked
So few Harry Potters can keep my attention, but this strikes all the right cords.
I love Minerva and the other teachers becoming fond and protective of Harry and I feel like you caught the unease, amazement and terror that would come from an abused child being thrust into a world of magic so suddenly, while expanding on the universe.

All the characters seem like people and no one is too OOC, so you have my following and favorite

Keep up the amazing work in all of your work

This is a good story. Personally I really like the concept of obscurils and Harry really should have been one.

Ok you got me hooked. Please continue this story. The story is very good and this Harry deserves to have a finished story. Keep up the good work.

Soo freaking gooood... just keep writing when you can, because you made me cry at least 5 or 6 times. You have talent...

Cool story bro

OP? Probably. Good? Yes. I eagerly await the next part.

I don't know what it is about this story, but I really like it. The characters are so relatable. I like the direct this is going. It's nice to see a slow progression of Harry recovering and starting to open up to the few he trusts. I love your Tonks, Susan, and Hannah. Thank you for the story.

Welcome back we all understand slumps. You've done a good job with the psche so far let's see what you have planned for troll killer. As far as Lucius, I always saw it as he found out that the diary could be used to control Slytherin s monster and wanted to tarnish the boy who lived credibility. Just so you know im fairly certain you only put an additional Scottish witch in to mess with me. Lol.