It was amazing! please, continue?!

Max's 'in head' talking has always been up to the writer for the most part. Ill have to see her interact with people to know if you 'got it right.' But dont try to get it right, you do what /you/ think is right.

endgame ship? pretty please?

Liking the story so far. I see a few grammatical oddities but seeing how english is a second language you are doing good and they are not wrong so you are fine. Looking forward to seeing Max wake up.

great job writing this story so far!

good story can't wait for the next one.

Great so far! Status says "complete" though... I'm hoping that's just an error?

Nice! Good to see an update

I think you mean “revenge” not “avenge”

I never expect this! I thought it was going to be an si where max didn’t have powers and just had everything alive for the sake of it but I’m surprisingly wrong and I’m totally happy with this choice! I can’t wait for the next chapter, please continue the great work!

Interesting take on the Hospital Ending. I will await more. :)

If you played Before the Storm, you might know her better. Just saying. Is this set right before Chloe is in the bathroom with Nathan?