Why not have Weiss and the new girl share Juane. Otherwise it's a very interesting story you've got going. I look forward to your next chapter please keep up the excellent work!

Look, I’m all in for any form of torture except for rape okay. How does limb dismemberment, dust-based tortures like salt & lemon upon open wounds or permanent paralysis sound to you?

You're thinking of the Tallarn dessert raiders, but if it's for plot convenicence and the Felinid, then I'm cool with it too.

I haven't seen a felinid featured in a story too often. I think I've only seen them as minor or background characters in two fics. I think one was in an imperial Knight story and the other part of an inquisitor's retinue.

I too prefer wise and kindly emps, but purging has its place. A well written scene of a powerful character's wrath is almost always my favorite part of a story.

Thanks for the note at the end. You saved me having to Google search Valya myself.

Just found this, love it my dude. Keep up the good work

cant ait for the next chapter

I don't hate weiss. Poor weiss. Jaune to the rescue with righteous, merciless fury and his new squeeze.

Welp fk m8. Where is Pyrrha tho?

For some reasons, I don't feel that this chapter meshes well with the timeline. So are you saying that it is Whiteknight (Jaune x Weiss) before his "death" (and somehow Pyrhha did not notice that)?

Aw, shit Jaune, I know that it's been like two years since you saw each other but you could have let the Snowflake down easy yourself. Not making your cat-eared waifu basically word-shiv her.

If the story is going to have some kind of polygamous relationship involving Jaune than do it in a way that does not attract Slaanishi deamonettes to Remnant. We don’t want the Chaos Gods to have another hold on a person, just throwing this out okay.

Would Pyrrha’s weakened will be destroyed with the reveal that Jaune is back but is already in a relationship with someone else or will Jaune be able to save her without putting a plasma bolt through her skull?

hopefully some romance

let me preface this with how much i am enjoying this. however,didnt oz say he was missing for 6 months? blake just said 4 months tho... also...when/how did jaune die? thought he just up and vanished but he says he did die. did he die for a bit when he got the implants from that techpriest. also was blake understanding the imperials with jaune? you made a point of the language problem earlier and im just assuming that whatever the emperor did to jaune means he can just slip back and forth between THREE seperate languages with ease. the three being high and low gothic and then remnantian or whatever you wanna call it. i say this cause not every imperial citizen can actually speak high gothic but most speak low. i figure inquisitorial troops might be required to know high gothic tho. its a status kinda thing. still looking forward to whatever you have next. also longer chapters are almost always awesome.

Awesome. Been into thisnfic since the beginning. Looking forward to more and I think it's really cool how you introduced Phoenix Squad to Remnant.

Oh I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Especially to see Pyrrha. And her possible heresies.