oh wow!...this is the best story i read so far!...love this version..

very fluffy but I like it this way - it's so nice to read sth so "pure":D And I like your writing-style!

YAY

::willingly falls into the bat of fluff made by by the author::

WAI!

i *love* this oh my gosh!

this was extremly well writen in a very tasteful way. you're writing style is awesome, i can't wait to see more of your work! _

Wow... what a nice, sweet story. ;_;

(It was also well-written, which is a bonus. _)

Good job! :)

I love it! I absolutely love it! *claps* Three cheers to Icicle Raindream for a superb piece of work! _

WOW! This was really good. Rock on! I liked it tons and I would love to see it conintued. Great job. Amazing! _

Raye-Rei

good start

Aw! That was so sweet! Just gotta luv it! PLease write more!

very Kawaii! i'm glad you didnt go to far with this scene, some authors would have, hahah. i like your discriptions, and your vocabulary is pretty expansive. good job overall, hope to read more from you soon:)

AWW!

Aw...so cute that's all you can say well apart from it was so good!

I love this! I love this! I love this! I love this! I love this! You've just GOT to continue this! It's so beautiful, you have to write more. Lots more! I love this! _v

aw... so cute and romantic! i love it! v/h all the way! keep up the good work! _

Wow, this is a wonderful start! Please continue...I think this will be a great story!