:Sigh: Garp’s an idiot, isn’t he? You would think he might possibly take into account the possibility of his ideas backfiring on him...

I love this so far I really hope there will be more on this and others when you can.

I really like this story I hope that you will continue to update.
I do wonder, have any plans for Hayate to interfear with the whitebeard pirates will Ace still be a fool that challenges the worlds strongest man or will Hayate's presence change that

So good

That was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:) stay safe

Awww, can’t wait for the next chapter! This so so awesome! Do you think Hayate will find out about Sabo? It’d be cool if she did, also I love the fact that Shanks is Basically Luffy’s dad and not Dragon.

Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched

I can’t wait for the next update

I hope you write more, I want to know about Ace’s journey and what Naruto/Naruko/Hayate interaction with the Whitebeard crew look like.

Love this can't wait for the next chapter
Good luck dealing with life and writing

I can’t wait for the next chapter, I’m honestly curious as to what is going to happen.

Love this story!

that is good. update soon please.

oh plz continue this fic im totally loving the premise u have going

can't wait what happen next! update more this story please! thank's