I loved it!

Lovely. This is a very very good Neverland story that fit all aspects of the characters and the setting. Neal was particularly obnoxious, and holy crap, calling Emma a whore while saying he wants her back is an idiot. A selfish idiot. I was so happy Emma told Killian the whole story about Neal so that he could tell her she was building a home in Storybrooke, with family and room for him. Wonderful, thanks for writing.

Complete perfection! I love this so much!

OMG I LOVED this story so much! Great job, thank you for writing it!

Great read! Too bad the show didn't have something similar! Really enjoyed all of the emotions between Emma and Killian. If felt very real and their characterizations were spot on. Wonderful last paragraph about darkness and cold vs. light and warmth.

This story was so freaking cute, I absolutely love Killian and Emma. Ugh my heart

So cute omg literally what I wish happened. I really think Eddie and Adam should’ve done a scene with her wearing his jacket

Wonderful. Canon divergence, Neverland, kind of bed sharing, Neal gets slapped, heart eyes Killian...these are some of my fav things. I miss stories based on canon. Thank you for writing this. Glad you lost control.

Beautiful thank you

Very nice divergence. Thanks!

Loved this!

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