Reviews for Broken Hope
Guest chapter 4 . 8/20
Omg I love this new chapter. Will naruto use his lust for her against him? or will he end up falling for naruto?. Will she find out about his use of ino?. OMG! OMG! I want to know. Please keep going this is one of the best madanaru fanfic I read. Where is kakashi and the others? What have they been doing while naruto was with madara? Love this fanfic
14brendale chapter 4 . 8/19
I feel like the way you portrayed Madara is pretty accurate. In the anime he seemed like a a person who enjoys control and has a very dominant personality. I have a question though, in a previous chapter Madara described her hips a child bearing hips, so is he implying he plans to revive the Uchiha clan with her? And where’s Sasuke?
qqn chapter 4 . 7/25
La suite?
Kenneth973 chapter 4 . 6/26
Yeah, she wouldn’t like it & will resist till the end.
acv6.ucb123 chapter 4 . 6/25
Cuando actualizaras la historia, esta muy bueno yo también soy muy fans de madara
Titania1796 chapter 4 . 6/6
Esta increíble espero que pronto actualices ya quiero que Madara tenga sexo con Naruko apuesto que sera increíble
Streema chapter 4 . 6/4
I'm so glad to read this chapter! Thank you!
Poor Naruko! We want to punch Madara! It's very traumatizing for a virgin!
I can't wait the next ! Please don't wait one year to write the next! Pleasssssssse!
Where are Sasuke and Gaara?
SaveTheWeak chapter 4 . 6/2
Hehe...
Mairposa chapter 4 . 6/1
Honestly after finishing reading the fourth chapter I was like wtf did I read. I read your author notes as I read the story and it seems like you got a really good grasp on Madara's personality. I understand the warning, because this story definitely needs them. The way Madara slowly breaks Naruko down is something I can see him do. Though what is the development of Naruko going to be once she is broken? It's hard to imagine Naruko broken, consider she is a strong woman. Plus is Naruko just going to become like an un/willing lover? It's hard to imagine that's all she would become. These are just questions that pop in my head as I read the story. Awesome job on the story and keep up the great work! I can't wait to see how Naruko's character development turns into.
Zenchi to zen'n no kami chapter 4 . 6/1
No me importa nada solo me importa que no se haya olvidado esta historia :) y esaalfinal del capítulo debe ser ino supongo :u
Daniel-palacio chapter 4 . 6/1
Simplemente fue excelente obra maestra realmente lo disfrute muchísimo jajaja enserio sigue así quiero ver más XD
Neashutatrum chapter 4 . 6/1
Yes finally an update
Mariusz1988 chapter 4 . 6/1
Yes, Naruko needs to defiled soon. That would break her for sure. A thought tho wouldn't this lvl of abuse and torture make her try killing herself?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4
Realmente esto es un grandísimo fanficion en verdad me encantó realmente espero que la retomes es una lástima lo dejas en la mejor parte algo tan bueno no sé debe dejarlo en el olvido se te agradece por escribir esta gran historia realmente me gustaría que la continuarás. ..
Guest chapter 3 . 2/23
continue pls
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