Is Eri doing something akin to what did to those zombies in Thriller Bark in One Piece? and is one of the people in training gonna try and save her?

0-0 uh oh

I know this is late but I'm just baffled that they never questioned why is there a living skeleton with them...

Carrots is 15, the perfect age to inter UA. It's why the bunny girl calls Chopper big brother.

Good character

I love the reaction to all the scars they have.

Pony and carrots friendship is the best.

I adore and couldn’t stop laughing at how each person reacted to conquerors and remain standing. Plus I think it was really accurate.

Lastly I am surprised Ochako didn’t manage to remain conscious considering her drive during the sports Festival. She was either missing the proper motivation at the time, or was the last to fall.

Too all over the place are you even serious in writing this

excellent work on this chapter and glad to see Zoro show his bravery and daddy Bakugo XD

They dont have quirks though why did you put quirt at the last part

Omg! This story has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it!

excellent work on this chapter and man these guys had and good time ;) also welcome back :)

hey i love the stuff you do but... it would be better with a rough guess of the next release date or something like that anyway thats all byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

read my story! its about my onepiece oc!

I kinda feel that you made them a little weaker when fighting the zero point robot, I mean Zoros could have easily cut through it with the way he cut Pika in half when he was the size of a mountain, and Luffy could have punched a hole through it as well. As well as the strength chart for Sanji it should have had power for 5, Franky for 5 intelligence as well because of what he built, the ships, robots, submarine, steam boat and laser beams. But I kinda like it so far. I'll make a more detailed review in some later chapters

Stop with all the parentheses. If you want to write a thought just use apostrophes in place of quotation marks and italicize it. And you really don’t need to stuff everything that isn’t spoken between a doubled set of parentheses. It’s just plain ugly to look at and ruins an floe for the reader and can cause people to just ignore anything written between parentheses.

And no authors notes in the middle of the story. Did Tolkien need to pop up in the middle of his stories to explain what elvish words mean, or why this or that was happening? Does Rick Riordan or Donita K. Paul need to do that? No. So why would you?

Also, while the story structure is rather good. Above average for this site even, it still needs a lot of work. I’d suggest picking up a novel, The Name of the Wind is great, or something by the aforementioned authors, and study how they build their sentences and paragraphs and chapters. And pay close attention to how they show, without needing to tell. Particularly when Zoro reads That guy who’s name I can never remember and thinks to himself about how he’s holding a lot of fear about him. It’s just awkward and sounds like zoro and you are just blowing your own horns. Don’t tell me that the guys quivering in his boots. Actually show him quivering in his boots

And seriously, if you retain one thing from this, keep your authors notes to the end, or better yet, not at all.

excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :)