I'm sure you have been told but half this chapter was repeated.
This story idea sounds interesting. And this natsu I like, he's already kissed her and he has her living with him too. Should bring them closer faster.

just found this story and i love it, can't wait to see what happens next xx

...How will Natsu know, who is life partner, his mate, will be? Because, he should pay attention to his emotions and/or behaviors, with Lucy... I do hope he finds out, very soon, and asks her to be his mate.

...With Happy, she'll probably be like a mother to him... Which, should Natsu come to the conclusion of his feelings for her, would make him very happy and even start thinking about having a family with her... To which he'll be very thankful, for making his "nest" big... Though, I wonder how many children he'll actually want?

I can't wait to see Lucy bond with the others... I just hope that those men don't find her, very soon... Otherwise, Fairy Tail will bring the war to them... Especially, should they learn what they did to her.

I loved the update but the chapter ending Is repeated

This story is very intriguing can't wait to see how it develops, I do hope you do not abandon this story it will be a great loss. I can't wait to read more.

Yay! An update! I really love the concept of your story so far. I personally think it’s very creative and interesting. I’m excited to see what creative ideas you come up with next for this story. Totally rooting for you and this story.

So happy to see an update! Can’t wait for the next one I love the story a lot .

Can yamake more?

Poor Lucy... I hope Nastu can help her.

Woah... What is going on on here...?

I love Laxuswhat just happened" that was hilarious
I'm picturing werewolf Lucy with the ears and maybe a tail?
That girl at the end was Levy, right?
Also, Natsu, when you want someone to shut up, you put your hand over their mouth, not your tongue down their throat
wtf is up with Lucy and her whole control other people's powers thing? sounds op
this is a lot of fun! thank you for sharing it with us!

great story ! can't wait to read more

This is great!

Ohhh...more of this story was a huge treat! I can't wait to see where this goes. It is so well written and interesting!

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see how she interacts with the rest of the guild! Laxus and Gajeel are too arrogant to see she was trying to help them lol. I also need to know if Levy is the same girl and what the heck Mira meant!