A LONG REVIEW: PART 6
If you haven't read the previous reviews, please scroll down to PART 1.

To close this series of long reviews, let me repeat myself one more time: THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!

To be honest, I'm afraid you won't finish this story, but I'm still very happy and grateful that you at least wrote it this far. If you don't finish it, it won't matter, because it was totally worth it. THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK !

I hope that the pandemic and the cahos that covid-19 carries has not brought you major problems or severe complications. Personally, I am having a hard time because I have lost my job and anxiety is killing me ... and unlike other times in my life, I cannot vent my emotions in fanfiction writing because I am terribly blocked (my story "Los Límites de Hermione Granger" is in a kind of hiatus). Anyway, I hope it's not happening to you.

I hope to read you soon (very soon) ... but without pressure ... I know that what you have to write is extremely complicated because you will have to reinvent a lot of plot and justify everything correctly. So I will understand if you take too long.

Once again, a million thanks!
My dear, it has been a pleasure to reread you and complete the reading of 9 chapters that I did not know existed!

I hope we will contact you very soon ... A huge kiss from Argentina ...

Angelina

A LONG REVIEW: PART 5

I read in some reviews a certain "guest" tell you things like: bad idea, not suitable, you should rewrite that scene, you should ... you should you ...

And you know what? Fuck them! Do you know what is the only thing you "should" do? IGNORE THEM !

Don't give them importance. You don't write to please whims. You do it because it pleases you, it amuses you and it frees you. And I can tell! Your story is made with the soul and with the intention of playing and discovering new worlds ... If that "guest" wants perfect grammar and a story made to measure, then let him pay you and read the Harry saga Potter.

Tremendous! I can't believe there are people commenting on things like that in fanfiction ... it's ridiculous.

Anyway ... I was a little angry and wanted to get rid of the bad taste.

For me the story is perfectly understandable and enjoyable as you carry it. Can we improve our writing? Yes ... ALWAYS ... but being an insistent bore is very unbearable snobbish.

I just hope that comments, like the ones this being has left you, have not brought you down with the continuation of this fanfic.

A LONG REVIEW: PART 4

I love each and every one of your characters. Each one has their own well-defined personality but, at the same time, they blend in with each other (for example when Hermione begins to relate to Harry and treats him like a brainless ... it is so Snape of her that it gave me a laugh and anger simultaneously) .

You have very original ideas to solve the plot ... some surprise me and others confuse me a bit (maybe because my native language is not English and I have to go and reread the end of 5th year and the beginning of 6th year ... but , I can't understand what really happened for the Slytherins to live a battle and lose Gregory in it ... could it be that in the middle of the summer, when they were in their training camp, they decided to go to the ministry to recover the prophecy? Harry went with them in that case? I don't know. I'm dizzy).

5th year was SPECTACULAR. Seriously!

One thing that gave me a lot of fun (and gave me a lot of pleasure) was Hermione's possible idea of subjugating the Death Eaters with the Draugt of the Living Dead. And do you know why? Because that's the way Death Eaters are subjugated in MY STORY ! LOL! I'm very glad that we think similarly because I really admire you.

A LONG REVIEW: PART 3

It doesn't hurt to tell you, and remind you, that I love your story. Far beyond the adorable (1st and 2nd year), dramatic (3rd and 4th year) and intriguing (5th and 6th year) plot that you have developed, but because the rhythm and structure of the writing is so refreshing, fun and engaging.

I think there are some very tiny changes in the first few chapters from when I first read them. Is that I read until chapter 7 ... and I had missed all the action!

I will tell you that I am writing a fanfic where from 6th year things change a lot compared to the original books ... so I understand you deeply and totally empathize with your hard and complex work. I can understand that what is coming in the future in this fic will require a lot of thought and time.

A LONG REVIEW: PART 2

So ... imagine my surprise when a few days ago I rediscovered this piece of art that is your story! Can you imagine my joy? I hope so, because I was really in a state of extreme emotion.

Of course, and accordingly, I started reading from the first chapter again. My idea was to leave a review in each chapter to be able to compensate you for the abandonment. But, as you can guess, I didn't make it.

The problem is that your story is so compelling that ... when you read, then read and read and read ... and read ... and it is impossible to stop, until you reach the end ! So I've decided to blame you. Your story is so good that you didn't let me pause at all. not even to leave you a few words.

A LONG REVIEW: PART 1

Hello Darling!
(I apologize in advance for my bad English, I'm from Argentina and despite reading lots of things in English, it's rare that I write today)

You will not believe what happened ... I lost the links to many of the stories I was reading 2 years ago. Then time passed and I couldn't get this particular fanfic back.

I remember that I accompanied you in the first chapters because the story really caught me. Unfortunately I have not reviewed you since April 2018 and it makes me feel somewhat sad to have missed all your progress.

I discovered this story yesterday and like how you've changed the story. I hope you come back and finish it. There are so many things that could happen and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

Thanks for the refreshing story. The format is quite novel, eg, 1-sided summer letters. A nitpick is that the story title and summary is a tad misleading: I mistakenly believed the story is about Daphne taking Hermione under her wing.

I look forward to new chapters!

Lol this is funny. Love it.

Wonderful story! I have a really good time reading these. Thanks for writing this!

"Later, Hermione could give an exact description of the curse she threw, the counter curse, and the origin- but she could not explain why she had cast it."

This is a super vague way to end their relationship, please write it out properly. Only a few sentences simply does not work.

It's Tabula Rasa, not Tabula Rossa
And not, the french DO NOT steal and obliviate muggleborn children. It's just too stupid an idea.

who's family - whose family

Why the hell would she ever go to another defence class, after already being assaulted once, and put under an Unforgiveable against her will?

Seems like not being sorted into Gryffindor has made her way too passive.

typo:
en mass - en masse

Please learn to do basic proofreading, and how to use spellcheck, and get yourself a beta, you seem to need one.

Imperious - Imperius

breath - breathe

labrythin - labyrinthine