Just read all this today and I love it.

Awwwww! That’s tooth-achingly sweet! I love it. Is it a bit silly I can’t wait to see how Josh and Donna meet Sam? And more interaction with Leo! You’re doing a wonderful job of building the events and Josh and Donna’s relationship. Also we get a lot of Josh’s family —which rocks by the way—but what about Donna’s family? Will we get to see them? Do they like Josh and his family? Does Donna get irritating/distressing phone calls from them? Do we meet Dr. Freeride or was that the jerk who put Donna in the hospital? Looking forward to the next chapter!

:( This is very sad. I hate to see Josh so overwhelmed with guilt. Honestly, I wonder why his parents haven't stepped in to try something different before now, but it's great that Donna can help him. I like that you were able to use the "you were a little boy, it's what you were supposed to do" line.

I look forward to every chapter you release! Is it silly I can’t wait for when Donna and Josh meet Sam? And when the Lymans meet the Mosses! That’s going to be a treat and half. Also it sounds like Noah’s got an ace up his sleeve with Wisconsin.

One thing I might suggest is double checking some of the grammar. Run it through Hemingway Editor, I like this when I want to make sure I caught the little things. It’s just a thought so take it or leave it, I think you’re doing wonderful!

Keep it up!️

This was intense but I'm glad that Josh's family knows her history and want to take care of her. I love that the last line is Noah about to make sure that legally she's protected.

I'm always so excited when another chapter of this story is posted! Yay!

Such a sweet chapter. I'm glad Donna was able to tell Miriam about the accident.

What does "Yeledah" mean? I looked it up and all I could find was "girl", but I feel like it means more than that here.

Please update :/

Hiya. I just wanted to say, that I’m be been having a really tough time recently but reading this story has been such an escape. Thank you so much for your beautiful words. Congrats on your baby girl and I cannot wait for you to update! Love Holly x

Well, I suppose having a baby is a good enough reason to neglect your story. But seriously, congratulations on your kiddo! Plus, it's always good to read another installment of these two as a couple of lovesick college kids. I look forward to reading more from you when you have the time.

Yay! Glad for an update. (How you managed is a miracle!)

thank you for coming back to this. it's an amazing version. can't wait for more.

I love this story. I agree with the others, every bit of this seems in character for Josh, Leo, & Donna. I hope you’re enjoying the time with your little one. It always goes so fast!

aww I love this

Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

The Lyman figuring out Christmas for Donna was really sweet. I chringed and giggled at Noah interrupting Josh & Donna in the middle of morning sex.

Loved Leo's appearance. Your version seems very in Character. I'd like to hear more about how he is working for a Republican president.

The last line was the best. So sweet.

Yes! Loved this. They’re just so sweet together and it was worth the wait! What a great date night and tender moment between them.

Thinking of you and baby!