I loved this story very much and I would love it if you wrote a short sequel that takes place during the first winter back in England, with them trying to think of excuses to explain it to there mother or something like that.

Beautiful, sweet, and faith-filled! I loved this story! (I know you wrote it some time ago, but I just found it.). Thanks for sharing!

I highly enjoyed your story I hope the sequel is just as good...

This story is wonderful

I loved this ! This was absolutely fantastic

And suddenly half of my kitchen is deprived of the air I suck in; now when it is over and I start breathing again!
Many thanks - especially for the magnificent ending :)

So glad Peter had that talk with Edmund. I am definitely now picturing Edmund shyly coming to his brother's room one night after a particularly troublesome nightmare.

But, am I just being a little dense? I gathered that his illness was perhaps a physical manifestation of his inner turmoil, but I suppose I don't quite understand exactly how/why that happened...

At any rate, I'm a little sad it's ended, but looking forward to more from you.

I do think these last few chapters could use a beta or you looking over them again. There's just some grammatical errors and some spots that could be reworked for clarity.

But, oh! That line, "Can you stay Pete? She doesn't come when you're here." Agh, that one struck my heart. Isn't it funny, like Pete I just want to give Ed a hug, even though I know how much he (and Skylar!) dislikes them.

Thanks - excellently filled with Hurt and Anguish just like in your rating;
But with comfort, even to us readers in the end! I have liked reading all!

Poor Ed! Poor Peter! You write their brotherly love relationship so well! Can't wait to see what's next

How does this not have more reviews?! This is SO GOOD! Favorite new story, protective Peter is the cutest thing ever!

Oh, Ed. I'm so worried. What is going on? All I can think is that the White Witch somehow still has a hold on him...

LOVE this! You're really talented, and the plot of this story is intriguing! Can't wait for more!