| Reviews for A Makeshift Family |
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   Deana chapter 1 . 10/17/2018 Great story! Poor Darius! Yeah it was an odd phrase, 'sleeping for 44 days'...it had to be a coma. Poor guy! |
| Jmp chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 Loved it, poor Darius, tortured, in a coma and worked himself into the ground to save humanity. But at least he has found a family. |
| pallysAramisRios chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 WOW LOVE IT hope it continues on! |
