okay, I am sorry but this has got to be your worst story. It is rather difficult to follow, especially since you don't use line breaks to indicate change of POVs and the writing is far below your normal abilities. Maybe you should rewrite this? I know you usually write better which is why this is all the more frustrating

This sounds really stilted. You got an entire paragraph where every single sentence starts with 'she'. Bit disappointed since I know you write far better than this

Great story.

Wonderful. More please.

Good story. Thanks.

Great 3rd chapter to round off the story. Enjoyed the tensions as they found out what was happening, and then how Sam and Jack had 'that' talk. Then he was able to moved on and still have his relationship with Sam. Thanks for taking the time and sharing.

Please update soon. Went back and reread some of your other stories to get my fanfic fix just now.

Liking it so far, look forward to reading more.

Oh! Thank for the update. Kinda reminds me of one of the Stargate books I read (emotions and progression! Not the actual storyline) that I really liked. Please update soon.

I'm hooked!

Oh you need to update this soon. And when she's better, Jack's gonna tease her about wrecking the plane.

Yay! They found her. At least one of the bad guys is caught. Another is still out there, and probably whoever is running the show. Great chapter! Thank you!

Interesting build up of tension and intrigue for the team and Sam. Looking forward to seeing the who and the why it is happening to Sam. Thanks for sharing.

And the plot thickens.

Excellent! Good job!