| Reviews for Unova Journeys : A new begining |
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   d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 2 . 10/10 So my only complaints are pacing and grammar...the story is good, but feels rushed as of Ch.2, I will continue reading and giving my opinion. Good luck writing! |
| Cecilia hatsune chapter 1 . 5/30 Type your review job |
| midnightscar17 chapter 8 . 5/27 This is just getting ridiculous |
| midnightscar17 chapter 2 . 5/27 Your grammar is very rocky. I suggest that you proof read it. |
| UltimateCCC chapter 18 . 5/26 Did I already told you about Ash having an associate working as a double agent? |
| foxchick1 chapter 18 . 5/26 Glad to see more of this fic. |
| Joda-Eragonsson chapter 8 . 5/26 Ash already has a Deino you said he got one from Liza when she brought him Charizard and Jangmo. So he now has 2 Deino as you have given him another one in the abused pokemon list. |
| Joanne Frances Tiano Cajilig chapter 17 . 5/24 This chapter is awesome! |
| UltimateCCC chapter 17 . 5/24 Dang that's a lot! |
| LukasChisDeans chapter 16 . 5/20 Jessie had an Arbok back in Kanto and James had a Koffing. There was also cacnea and another Venus fly trap like pokemon as well that James had. Jessie also had a moth pokemon but she released it in one of the episodes. |
| Cecilia hatsune chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 Type your review here.I like your story |
| warfighterzack chapter 6 . 2/21/2019 its daddy not dady kid learn how to spell |
| UltimateCCC chapter 16 . 12/27/2018 That leaves 11 frontier brains. |
| ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 11 . 12/21/2018 Pikachu knowing impossible moves? I would have thought it was Zorua in disguise. I have officially lost interest. Though, good luck with your story. |
| ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 10 . 12/21/2018 Wow, it takes ten chapters for the story to live up its title. |
