So happy to see more of this story. Love Jackson and Ramona's interactions growing up. Also, I second the motion of wanting to see how Jackson won Ramona back after he cheated on her.

Yes! It’s back!

You should make more. Maybe you could do the years Jackson was trying to make it right with Ramona?

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So, I like this story but the only complaint is that you should separate the dialogue of different characters into different paragraphs. Like when you have Ramona speak then all of a sudden Jackson speaks, make sure you start a new paragraph for Jackson speaking.

Amazing chapter

Thank you for sharing this. I think I really needed to read this story with this kind of message at this point in my life. I still have a long way to go with fixing some issues I have, but I think this story has really gotten me thinking on what I have to do to improve things.

Both

Maybe Jackson and Ramona can just chill naked inside their house

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It would be nice to maybe see Max and Rose in a story

As someone who went through a somewhat similar experience at a young age, I can very much relate to this. The feelings of making love associated with something negative in your past can really screw you up. But I think Tien learning to try to associate those feelings with something positive is spot on with what's been starting to help myself.

The beginning of this chapter was hard to read, but I think that was your point. This chapter was relevant, well written, and just felt real. You've really got a strong story here and it means a lot to me to read it, and I'm sure to many other people who don't feel strong enough to admit it.

Nice ending

Just wanted to say I loved reading every chapter of this series. You definitely have a strong realistic narrative with great relatable characters. Love it!

I really love their heart to heart