| Reviews for Phoenix Lament |
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RainbowPotter chapter 21 . 9/7 WHAT DOES SHE MEAN THEY AREN'T BOYFRIEND AND GIRLFRIEND? THEY DIDN'T BREAK UP! ALSO I LOVE THE STORYYY! REALLY WANT TO READ MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! 3 3 3 |
BellePheonix chapter 21 . 8/2 So happy to read this update and can’t wait to see Lara get more involved with the Order |
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 21 . 8/1 Nice chap |
Wikked chapter 21 . 7/31 I really liked this chapter. I am also dying to take a stroll through their house. I feel another burrow being born here. I find that whole part of the chapter highly entertaining. I was slightly underwhelmed by Walter’s return, I guess (not saying it was bad). If I was to give any constructive criticism, I guess I would have wanted a but more of a reaction from Lara. I obviously can just think from my perspective and if my sister was gone without trance for any amount of time only to come home injured... I’d be a panicked, sobbing mess. Safe to say though that I am not a Gryffindor xD I guess I would have liked to see more worry out of Lara over her brother and maybe more of a discussion about the order. I feel like it was just slightly brushed past too quickly. I realize I’ve written a novel about this so it may seem like I hate it - I promise that’s not the case. I just want to try and explain my way of thinking properly. I hope I don’t come across as rude. |
Pamela Hutchins chapter 21 . 7/30 Great chapter! |
CrackHeadBlonde chapter 21 . 7/30 Oooohhh she’s gunna join the order! Love that! Love when she reacts with other Weasleys! Hopefully Fred and George bail on school soon! |
Wikked chapter 20 . 7/14 Wow, great story! I loved it this far! Can’t wait to see what happens next. I wonder if she’ll be involved with the order. |
GreenerGrass chapter 20 . 6/3 Great chapter! I found your story a couple of days ago and I want you to know that I'm really enjoying it so far! 3 |
wedontkilltheliving chapter 20 . 5/23 Let me just say I LOVE this story so much! Ive been meaning to do homework all day (all my stuff is laid out and my computer has shown me all my assignments I have due) but I literally could not put my phone down because I was so invested in this. You’re doing such a great job keeping everyone from the books so in character and I absolutely love all your OCs. I love Lara/Fred so much, you did a perfect job putting them together in such a romantic and natural way. I’m also so happy you’re doing a happy ending instead of Fred dying (I think we could all use some cheer). Thank you so much for sharing the story on here - I can’t wait for the next update! |
Frazzle chapter 20 . 5/22 this story is brilliant! absolutely love Lara's character and the scenes with her and Fred make me swoon! I can't wait to read what happens in the 2nd half! :) |
CarolinaFlint chapter 20 . 5/22 Wonderful chapter! I always love reading about post-hogwarts life and you've done a great job of it here. I especially like the bit about Amanda at the end-felt pretty accurate to what must be going through the majority of hogwarts graduates' heads. Thanks for the shout out at the end! I love reading your story as well. Always so well-written and the chapters feel very thought out. Keep up the good work and I hope you are staying safe and healthy :-) |
Pamela Hutchins chapter 20 . 5/21 Yes! Fred lived bless you! I’m so happy right now! |
WinterEveOrchid chapter 20 . 5/21 I'm sooo happy for the update, and very excited to know that you'll keep fred alive, I totally agree we need positivity right now and fanfics are meant to alter canon anyway. I'm curious to know what lara's going to do while fred's at school (umbridge yikes). Thank you for the update and for the fic recsyou def can't go wrong with bluekat). |
hmm chapter 20 . 5/21 it was ok |
scoroses chapter 20 . 5/21 I’m so happy you’re updating this story again! I missed Fred and Lara. I’m literally about to restart it so I can experience it over again! Also, I’m pleased with your decision to keep Fred alive. Eagerly awaiting your next update! |