A good story. Hope you come back to expand on it more

This is a good story so far and you need to work on it a bit more cause I feel like it needed a little more to the story. But over all keep up the work and I hope this goes well later on as the story goes.

That's a good story dude

Great story.I hope to see more stories like add more Naruto characters pairing with Naruto...

I really despise this kind of AN! makes me want to murder someone(you)!

Wel shit

Love this story! There's rarely any NarutoxTsunade stories out there that dig deep into their relationship.

Well I always like Tsunade, since the first time she appeared in the manga.. I hope you make a series with this pairing, a Time travel fic, yeah that would be great.. or continue this to next Generation..

great chapter keep it up

Go read “finally” a naruto/tsunade romance of the author hyvnn, and try to learn something from it.
Instead if you just want to write smut and lemons, try at least being a little more creative because with this It take less if I watch porn.

good

i love ths pairing and i found the synopsis intresting...but tbh it still felt like the standard narutoxtsunade smut...where the relationship isn't devoloped and thsy already like each others , naruto call her tsu-chan ( which is something i can't imagine him doing even if they're an item) , age difference and the obstacles of such a relationship are thrown aside ( the taboo of their relationship is what make the pairing appealing , take that and tsuande is another naruto love intrest#25) and finally a rushed sex scene just to cross the checklist

you could've made it a multichapters where you show how naruto affection started from that kiss...saying that he have a crush on her in the synopsis without showing it in the story isn't good imo

don't get me wrong i love narutsu smutty story...hell i'm trying to write one...and for your first story this is really good...except it's another uninspired narutsu smut with nothing qpecial that will be blended with the other hundreds identical stories

Nice fic

Good story and the lemon was pretty great for a first time, you could later turn this into another story were there romance started after pein arc but because of their age and status they keep it a secret while naruto have friendship with benefits with shizune and maybe konoha 11 girls who all have hero crush on him.

Please continue