| Reviews for A Good Jaune is Hard to Chase (But, Oh, What Fun It Is!) |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 5/2 The joke is on you, Blakey. |
 246vili chapter 11 . 4/21 Nice, brutal twist at the end. Even if Jaune actually die by snu-snu, he will have the last laugh. BTW, am I the only one who's worried about Blake actually hunting down and savagely murdering Sun once she finds out the monkey Faunus robed her of the change of having Jaune's children? Keep up the good work. |
| Heku03 chapter 11 . 4/21 Blake: curse you, banana brain curse youuuuuuu |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/21 I'm just going to pretend this ended with Jaune saying I love you Blake Also if you hate Knightshade so much why the hell do you even write it, I mean it's not like Jaune and Blake ever really get a happy ending together in any of the stories you two write. |
| Gabriel chapter 11 . 4/21 Well, Blake’s gonna flip out once she finds out about Jaune’s “disability” |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/20 Jaune told Blake she didn't want the smoke. The lie detector determined that was a lie. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/28 Whens the next chapter? |
| Roktoof chapter 9 . 1/8 Okay, I get Winter, Whitley and Weiss, but Willow herself?! That's insane. |
| 246vili chapter 10 . 1/4 And so the story of "The coutles tales of druged rape of Jaune Arc" continues. So this time Blake will have her way. |
| Knight chapter 10 . 1/3 A decent chapter to read, but Jaune’s speech sounded really off. It jumped from being too formal to too foreign. For starters when Jaune first saw Blake he said, “Oi! Belladonna...” that doesn’t sound like Jaune. It should sound more like Hey, Blake.” That’s causal and more like Jaune. Try to think on a more casual side, how a young man like Jaune would talk. Have you also considered writing additional parts from your other RWBY horror story? Or writing about other characters aside from Willow, and Blake? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/2 Hey, chief! We need a Blake and Jaune yandere story soon. A yandere story in which he learns to like it. Please please please! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/26/2019 So will we ever actually get something written between Jaune and Blake, since you had Pyrrha ruin it for them. |
| willcraftNEX chapter 6 . 4/18/2019 six now... once again, the poor boy has no idea about what is coming for him... run and hide juane, run and hide... |
| willcraftNEX chapter 4 . 4/18/2019 three now... he's gonna end up dead at this rate... |
| willcraftNEX chapter 2 . 4/18/2019 oh shit... i'd say run, but it doesn't work so well when their faster than you, and stronger. the best option is to hide and hope. remember, if it has a vagina and looks somewhat pretty, don't trust it. instead, punch it and run as fast as you can |
