Such a great story!
I love the mind-control trope and you did it amazingly here. All of the characters are spot on and I especially enjoyed Jason's perspective. He was the perfect mix of sarcastic while also not-so secretly caring. And Dick and Damian's relationship is always adorable.
The action scene was also very exciting to read while being easy to follow. I loved that you showed some of the traits of the characters through their fighting style.

I would never call Dick best bar fam fighter but the most mobile that's for sure. The worst thing in this scenario would be psychological torture the other three would go through.
I mean, Dick is their happy to lucky big bro. The only one who really fought with him would be Jason.
Beautifully done. Great analysis of the characters.

Awww that was sweet from you Jaybird cool leadership

i loved it. very well written and not too sappy the perfect combo of angst, action, drama, and, family! everyone was in character and had seperate personalities just like how the og authors write them and i know that is hard to do. keep it up girlie!

Aww that was cute and well written

Wonderful one-shot. I love how they all come together to aid Dick and how they're all willing to be there for him.

I think my teeth rotted it’s so sweet!

Lovely work!

IM SO EXCITED TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN! AND AGAIN AN AMAZING STORY! EEEEK MY HEART IS SO HAPPY! YOUR STORIES ALWAYS MAKE ME SO HAPPY AND MY HEART JUST RUNS AROUND IN PURE DELIGHT! THANK YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING! I LOVE YOUR STYLE SO MUCH!

This was awesome. But then again I already knew it would be cause I've read a ton pf your work and it never fails to impress me.

Alec