This is an amazing fic! Love the bond between Lance and Red.

beyond amazing. I loved every second

This is an incredible story. So well written and interesting throughout. Great adventure with believable action and such variety of OCs. I love this story; thank you so much for sharing your talent! Also, it needs fan art of badass Lance. ;-)

I didn't know I needed a story like this till I read it. I am awestruck! Thank you for sharing your story and I'm looking forword to your next update!

Amazing 1000000/10

THIS WAS SO HECKING GOOD, I want more , so much more.

yay we're back to the others! I wonder how the story will be affected by the lack of our red paladin? certainly something interesting between allura and lotor?
oh crap. I just realised: keith wasnt there. so he gets to listen as everyone tries telling him they think lance is dead. poor pidge is taking this super hard too

oh sweetie... open space is going to hollow you out isn't it? maybe you should have brought a fox-cat for company? or not, seeing as you have very little food. or yes, though... how did it even get onboard? when did it? ah well. now he has a friend!
this crystal-people planet is interesting, and the design of the Dira is really cool. and that's the same protective nature that landed you in this situation Lance (though I love it)
your still injured! why are you getting involved in battle, you boob! (I know exactly why, but it wont stop me worrying about him) at least he's ok, and he did his job as a paladin! and he's going to get food! (I hope)
this is a really good chapter, I just had to review at the same time as I read.

im glad Stick was so useful though im worried about Lance's moral if he's having trouble remembering why he made the 1st log (and, you know, sleeping for 24hours). im also getting a deeper fear that Rinnal is realllly far from his home. these fox-cats sound really cute, darting over the trees to snag balloon-creatures. im wondering what a pylon is and if he should go there, maybe its like pylons here? im getting a feeling Red's not fully healed...

yay Lance is alive! unfortunately he's also very injured. im very proud of him for getting his shoulder back into place and making a splint for his leg, he always seems like the one with the best first aid skills. this planet sounds really pretty, but I get this feeling its a long way from that radiation belt planet. (great chapter!)

Pidge is losing it, Hunk is losing it, im losing it and we're all screaming.
Lance is my favorite paladin, and I love how this chapter clearly shows his protective side (something I learned yesterday is one of the defining qualities Blue looks for) I hope we learn soon what happened to him!

I really really love this fanfic I was hoping you could do more chaps or a sequel, it's so good and amazing. If you want to reply find me on tumble as deafeningfunsoul

Holy shit I love this story! it's amazing, and it kept my attention and this is one of my favourite fics to date!

Please don’t tell me this is finished! ;-; I want more! T-T

I loved the fight sence in this chapter! The disconnectedness from Lance and the others was felt through the writing. I hope Lance is able to make thoughs connections again.

Anyway Happy Holidays! And thank you for getting Lance back to his team.

Please update! I can't wait any longer :(