Reviews for Percy Jackson The Return
Lissana Strause chapter 3 . 10/7/2019
Plss update so soon..
Rossmonster1 chapter 3 . 3/4/2019
Oh no... I feel so bad, but this story is so good, please continue.
ixShiroKishi chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
so it didn't transfer correct but it's chapters 3 to 5, not 35 considering Starblade's stopped at chapter 18
ixShiroKishi chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
Hi, just wanted you to know that I'm in the same boat as Freakofnature65, and surprisingly I found the story he was talking about. Stop plagiarising. You should give credit where it is due, because I noticed that your chapters are exactly (EXACTLY) Starblade176's chapters 35 of Everlasting Promisess/7599584/3/Everlasting-Promises). If you're going to branch off somewhere from Starblade's story that's fine, but at least have the decency to credit someone for their work that you copied.
Freakofnature65 chapter 1 . 9/27/2018
Good start, I remember reading something really similar to this a while back before it was discontinued. Really hope you don’t do that with this story. Looking forward to reading more
Really chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
So the man who defeated the Titan of Time and fought countless creatures was suddenly beat by a novice son of Posideon, tortured, and this fool son of Ppsideon managed to get all of these legendary torture weapons after barely coming up in the world...and Percy didnt kill him after everything that happened...right, you know that's just horseshit.
Russel Lawrence chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
The story is moving along waaaay too fast. Slow down and take a breath. What essentially could have been 3 chapters was mashed up into one. I know the start at the very least is the same ole cliche bullshit but still, don't rush the story so fast that people get confused wharf exactly they just read