Honestly, I think you lost direction with this story. You had an idea with merit but it got lost somewhere when you kept piling one thing after another.

Also, the Hunter's character is far too vague. It's as if he doesn't know what type of person he's supposed to be. No clear motivation and no drive with no goal to pursue basically. There should be more existential introspection.

I came from 'The Longest Hunt' and 'The Night Unfurls' so having this kind of poorly defined Bloodborne character somewhat aggravates me.

I have feel Glynda about get surprise .

update next chapter of Hunt the Corruption

huh.

can update next chapter of Bloodborne and Akame ga kill crossover

This fic is getting out of hand. You really need to get back onto the track you established in chapters 1 through 5.

For example, the previous chapter got us nothing and this chapter is random, nonsensical, confusing, and just plain stupid. You were doing pretty well. Then chapters 6 and 7 came out.

Fav/Followed because I'm very interested.
One thing I have to say if that I'm finding it hard to follow. A lot of things are happening and new characters are popping up. It would help if you stuck to Andy's POV and introducing things at a slower pace, to build up the world.
Maybe increase the chapter length to include more points of view if necessary.

Rakuyo OP
What would happen if she blew his whistle?

Love it. Its RWBY and Bloodborne done right. Whats not to love

huh.

Wow. A Crossover featuring characters (with character) other than the Good Hunter and the Doll? Your portrayal of these Bloodborne characters pleases me with the vivid introductory scenes yet underlying ambiguity present throughout the game. I am most curious to witness the power and might of Yharnamite hunters in a Remnant brimmed with Grimm and traitors. You have my faith and support.

good update

I can't wait for the bad guys to realize how utterly fucked they are. And for the huntsmen to get an inferiority complex. At least, I hope so. Either way, Oobleck will be having the time of his life.

Great chapter!
Can't wait ta see a fight scene!
Take your time updating!

More likely he will be pissed they were playing with his weapons. Ozpin will be pissed they fiddled with precious artifacts. Oobleck will have an anuerism at their endangerment of part of history.

The chapters are a little too fast paced. Slow down, give visuals, observations, thoughts, and feelings.