i hope there is more of this please update as soon as you can please

So he looks West... Casterly Rock? Lannisport? Crakehall? Excited to see what the bastard will do now that he has a command, hope he doesn't make a botch of it

"Justice to lowborn, highborn or my own blood", it's gonna be awkward when Jaime is released...

You need a beta pronto! This is well written but there are silly grammatical and spell errors that can be avoided or corrected with a beta's help. For instance, why would Robb ask Jon to rise if he was already standing tall without fear? It's a good story, I'm interested in reading it without having to sift through the minor messes.

I am really enjoying this alternate history and timeline. It is nice to see and I wait for more. I only hate the waiting. The waiting is the hardest part.

id offer to beta for you but i dont trust my handle of grammar completely to check other peoples work. anyway, i cant wait for the next chapter, and up till now its been more than interesting.

another good chapter, and id like a pov from Aemon.

you need to comb through this chapter for typo's, i would help but i forgot and besides ffn blocks c and p, so i cant do anything about that.

Harrenhal was spelled incorrectly and so was Whether, which was spelled as Whither. Other than that it was a good read.

this is very well written and quite sensible.

I like it

So originally you said that jon didn't fight the wights at castle black! But now he's having flashbacks?

Great chapters, i would love to be a beta reader, if reading and analysing logic in plot is the only thing i have to do. Best of luck. Although will jon have similar heritage as show?

Muito boa a sua história, espero que Jon ajude Robb a manter a sua palavra com os Frey. Robb é um grande estrategista militar, mas falhou gravemente ao não manter a sua palavra com os Frey e ficar mantendo prisioneiros, se não estou enganada ele executou um grande lorde (acho que o Karstark) por ter matado dois garotos Lannisters, compreendo que o que ele fez foi errado, mas a ação de Robb ao executá-lo o fez perder exército, guerra é guerra...

I just hope that Robb support Renly and marry roslin Frey