Good God, this was beautiful.

THIS IS SO HOT. Though I think it's a crass way of describing it because THIS... THIS WRITING IS POETRY.

AHHHHHHHH

Woah, I abso-frickin-lutley adore this!

So beautiful! Loved all the descriptions and the religious comparisons. It was fantastic! I can definitely see Erik feeling like a sinner for even thinking about it, but that feeling of guilt never being enough to stop him to do it again. Lovely!

Holy everything that is anything! That was incredible! I am dead.

Literally the 5 best paragraphs in the fandom. This is everything. I swear I've read it twenty times

Sinning never sounded so good.
"...feels the grip of grace itself..."
"...she is coming undone at his voiceless prayers."
Lawd.

This was soooo good. Wow

SADGJDHFGJKLSDHGDL I AM DEAD

This is so so gorgeous and so freaking HOT. OMG. What I would not give to be Christine in this moment.

"He sins as he lifts a trembling thigh to settle it with the weight of contrition over his shoulder": this is where I died

Very good, very hot

This is gorgeous. Brava.

Beautifully written!

This is absolutely poetic to read, oh my goodness. It’s erotic in the ways it barely touches the physicality of the sex and the flow of the sentences just complements the content beautifully as we go through Erik’s thoughts. He’s so wrapped up in his own thoughts, but because his thoughts are all of Christine it’s so easy to follow what’s going on beyond his mind and see the way he thinks and how he acts. And your imagery and metaphor blend so smoothly, it’s breathtaking! I especially loved the line, “he looks up to see the chips of colour dancing from the eyes that shine like rose windows through barely-cracked eyelids“, it paints such a lovely picture of the scene and Christine and where Erik is mentally and physically, it was a wonderful read!

Excellent analogy throughout, and a nicely done piece to boot!