My only problem with this story is that it is not descriptive enough. This seems to be a running reoccurrence in most, if not all, of your stories. The stories are good but you tend tell the audience instead of showing. Don't tell me he destroyed those titans show me how he destroyed them. Describe the battle. For what it is, it's pretty good. It's just not impactful. Hope you continue to grow as a writer.

im quite interested in this fic, it has a lot of potential. cant wait to see what happens next, and i hope this wasnt abandoned

I have nothing to say but... HOLY SHIT. This was amazing. I'm hoping for you to continue it. The plot has got a lot of potential.

jojoboy914 I love your work the si/oc story are so good my favourite story's are the dark titan and the Avatar: The Power of Thunder and the lot of reviews is put in for a good job done but can you make si/oc dark/grey storys when oc can be a villain who build his powerbase in the chaos of the world here are some ideas to help build some ground for the story worlds.

:invader zim story si/oc irken who half the tallest size and is planning to takeover irken empire with a fake mission to be the earth invader and slow start his rebellion p.s he has a harem with gaz , tak , tenn, zita, miyuki.

:harry potter story to replaced The Snake in the Lions Den story si/oc is dark/grey muggleborn wizard who is in house Slytherin and two years before harry potter and planning his rise to power in the wizard and the muggle worlds with magic and cunning oh an hes a Metamorphmagus with the mind of petyr Baelish and with influence magic to build a cult of followers with some followers be in the harem.

:Spartacus: Blood and Sand with si/oc as the young brother of Quintus Lentulus Batiatus who like his bother want house bartiatus to rise higher but he went takeover and use Spartacus rebellion to eliminate few rival competitors romans and to gain a few woman to add his harem like the loyal Naevia who fall in love with him Seppia childhood friend and Lucretia.

these are the story ideas I hope you like them and think about it.

jojoboy914 I love your work the si/oc story are so good my favourite story's are the dark titan and the Avatar: The Power of Thunder and the lot of reviews is put in for a good job done but can you make si/oc dark/grey storys when oc can be a villain who build his powerbase in the chaos of the world here are some ideas to help build some ground for the story worlds.

:invader zim story si/oc irken who half the tallest size and is planning to takeover irken empire with a fake mission to be the earth invader and slow start his rebellion p.s he has a harem with gaz , tak , tenn, zita, miyuki.

:harry potter story to replaced The Snake in the Lions Den story si/oc is dark/grey muggleborn wizard who is in house Slytherin and two years before harry potter and planning his rise to power in the wizard and the muggle worlds with magic and cunning oh an hes a Metamorphmagus with the mind of petyr Baelish and with influence magic to build a cult of followers with some followers be in the harem.

:Spartacus: Blood and Sand with si/oc as the young brother of Quintus Lentulus Batiatus who like his bother want house bartiatus to rise higher but he went takeover and use Spartacus rebellion to eliminate few rival competitors romans and to gain a few woman to add his harem like the loyal Naevia who fall in love with him Seppia childhood friend and Lucretia.

these are the story ideas I hope you like them and think about it.

when is the next chap release

U left it on a cliff hanger You right and utter bastard, I demand that u update this awesome story with the same awesome writing that u have done before so I can continue to enjoy this awesome story

He’s like me I would die for my family you do not and I repeat you do not mess with someone else’s family but if you mess with my family there’s let’s just say you’re gonna have a bad time

Update...

Uhhhh so now he knows, but i suppose Eren wont say anything, is his brother after all

Cue round about

I’m new to the AoT fandom and while waiting for Season 4 I decided to immerse myself in the wonderful world of fanfic. And truth be told, it’s been kind of a let down. However, along with one four chapter fic I found earlier, yours is the best one I’ve come across. I was so sad when I reached the end of this chapter. I hope one day you’ll come back to it, but if not I just wanna say I love this fic and it’s honestly my favorite one.

Updaaaaaaaaaaaattttttteeeeeeeee

More chapters please

if he was going to make love with anyone It should have been Mina, after all in my opinion she died too soon in canon, she deserves a little love.