| Reviews for Harry's Twin |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/15 Wow... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17 How awesome that it for once wasn't a bashing Lily and James or abandonment WBWL story. I really wish it would have been much much longer xD |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 The best WBWL story! It is nice to read a story in which Harry's parents are not out of character but continue loving Harry and his brother. |
 Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 Love this! Well done! |
| RabbitRuler2 chapter 1 . 12/11/2018 So good |
| TheMonitor1079 chapter 1 . 12/8/2018 Absolutely the vest WBWL story ever. Thank you! |
| Herochick007 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 Yes, the time travel bit is a mite confusing, but warning about it would spoil the ending. |
| G12G4 chapter 1 . 10/24/2018 That was a great story. A simple dialogue script doesn't always work but you did an excellent job of it. It has a nice plot and is decently complex, not a simple twin story by any means, you really thought it through. There's no need to warn about time travel, though, people can figure it out. It would actually detract a bit to give a warning ahead of time, part of the appeal is the reader has to figure out what in the world is going on. |
| illerayn chapter 1 . 10/22/2018 Very interesting, with a pellicular manner of writing which I found really good for this sort of stories (even if I think that reading 200k word written in this manner would be quickly exhausting). Thanks for writing. |
| thisistotallyaname chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 Nah, figuring out the time travel is fun |
| AverageFish chapter 1 . 10/3/2018 I love all of your time travel stories, but this one is my favourite. Your use of repetition and the way you build your plot like a song with a chorus really appeals to me. Please keep writing, best of luck with your Ausbildung, and happy 3.10 to you. If you ever need a beta feel free to pm me. I'd be honoured. Thanks and kind regards. |
| Rooster the king chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 Wow... Superb story... Loved it... |
| eternaltrekie chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 That was an interesting story. I liked the time travel twist at the end. |
| lexus4444 chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 give no warning. like it as is. |
| sunsethill chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 As always, this was a wonderfully creative take on the WBWL trope. It was wonderful to see how loving the whole family was even though Harry was an odd child. I also loved that Harry wanted so desperately to protect Jamie's innocence so that his parents could have one "normal" child. I also loved how you characterized Ron in this one. Him not noticing that Harry Potter was Jamie's brother because he didn't see "Slytherins" as individuals is actually very perceptive. But then, Ron is an adrenaline junkie, so seeing how "cool" Harry is in action truly would cause him to begin loving Harry, too. I'm going to need to read this one again soon because it was so fun! |
