nice tits cinder. when r u gonna fuck jaune and have ruby join.

Nice kiss.

Dang it. Just want them three to fuck already. More pls. Thanks for the chapter.

so what are everyone's ages then of ruby is 13

Hello good author, its been a while since i reqd this fic, but that being said it was a great chapter nonetheless. Especially the ending and thing that was a great to end with that amout of fluff. The fight was what I can imagine cinder pulling off and how its pacing is going. I would like to say that it be great to add entries of cinders diary, can give us bit of insight of her more qlong with everyone shes with.

I love this and regret not being able to look into the future to see the rest of this

This was a nice chapter.

Niiice kiss. Slice of life is nice.

Dat cliffhanger tho.

I'm actually surprised that Blake hasn't shown up at all at this point of time. Anyway, great chapter!

Nice worldbuilding. But more intimate chapters pls!

Am I the only one wondering why Blake isn't in this, I mean out all the characters to be goth doesn't she seem like a good choice.

I'd have to agree that Ruby being 13 does make it kinda creepy. Besides that, great chapter. Kinda wish it gets updates more recently. Also I hope Cinder kills the friendzone with blessed arrows.

ok so I will echo the guy who said that 13 year old Ruby is too young, unless we get a timeskip. Otherwise Cinder kinda has to win by default. also, for some reason the idea of Jaune being a goth kid is...weird.

Actually I wouldn't have noticed Stress Relief until you pointed it out. Also some of the angst is forced and contrived. Still, here's to hoping for more!