So short but so much said in this one shot well done so heartwarming and adorable i cant say more with words you just intrigued me with continue this story of the second author.

Great post 5-13 story. The beginning of a happy ending for Charah. Thanks for posting this for us.

Love it! Love it! Love it!

Sweet attempt at fixing what still today looks like unfinished business - and I am not one to complain so quickly about unusual finales (ST-VOY finale comes to mind, unusual for the franchise). This story could fill that gap, as it delivers what one previous review (by David Carner) said: "That beach scene...you just need 30 more seconds of something, and this is perfect." Seconded.

Thank you. So cathartic. I rarely watch the finale (I stop with “Baby” while all is right with the world) but when I do I know I will return to this drablet ( :-) ) to ease the pain (and anger).

Bravo!

Holy smokes! How is it that I never wrote a review for this story, WG? I came back to reread the story (something I've done many times) and decided to look at the reviews as I was curious to see what I had said… and I hadn't! We've discussed this story so much directly, I've even written about it in my own author notes and borrowed from it for my story, but I must add this here- This story calmed the storm that the series finale had left in me. Before, from time to time some odd or end would make me remember the finale and it would bring back the frustration and anguish that the finale had rained down upon me. This story helped to mostly wash that away; as I've said elsewhere, reading it the first time was therapeutic. Thank you.

I never tire of these types of stories. Thanks for giving us such a warm and fuzzy extension of that final scene. You managed to really get the emotions of the situation in such a short one shot. Well done.

Ok, Ok, so I'm an idiot. I reviewed Hail Mary before I found this one.

Well done. Thank you!

Until you wrote this, I did not think that anyone
could fix that crap ending. I think that you did
an excellent job with this story. This posting made
my day in the Fan Fiction world. Thank You, JR

Enjoyed this, WG. Hope we see more from you in the future.

They really flubbed the finale. Thanks for fixing it.

very emotional and so nice

Emotions actually physically separate from memory. What a great point and helpful therapy for anyone who disliked that ending.

So very many fictions on this subject. It was how I got into fan fiction writing myself, trying to fix that terrible ending. The return of emotions without memory is not a common variety.

Well. Done! That beach scene...you just need 30 more seconds of something, and this is perfect.