This was a pretty creative story. I appreciate that there was a slow burn to the relationship and that you didn't speed up the plot points of either story too much to get to the AU sections afterward. The ending chapters did feel a bit rushed with month long leaps at the start of both, but the ending itself was satisfying. I don't think the M rating was necessary (the single chapter it pertained to could be edited and made tame) but I'm glad it didn't stop me from reading the whole thing. Also, there are a lot of spelling errors and random sentences that could stand to be beta-ed to really put a final polish on this tale, but that's up to you. Best, ~Aki

Loved it!

Rosalie WAS the only vampire aside from Carlisle to go her whole existence without tasting human blood once. Her record was only ALMOST as clean as Carlisle's because she murdered those assholes who raped her and left her for dead, being very careful not to spill any blood because she didn't want any part of them inside her again. Esme's record was ALMOST as clean as theirs, the thoughts surrounding her ONE slip-up having been what prompted Edward's decade long run as the mind-reading vampire vigilante. Hermione not tasting human blood would make her the THIRD known vampire (to the Cullens, at least) to have that level of control.

oh, i was sad that teddy was pushed away. but I understand it was the best

the loss of magic was sad, but I love the new powers

it was an incredible story
bright and creative
Thank you for sharing :)

(ノ Д ） ノ ︵ - “TABLE FLIP, WHAT THE FUCK

totally unexpected but i love it, lmao
omg

I'm sad for andromeda and in a way, for bella too

Omg

hey, that was hot and sweet
i thought edward was wrong in his jealous choices and press hermione
it's good that he recognized the shit he did

and the two together was sweet

I always thought that if Bella wasn't transformed by the Cullens, she would run to be transformed by the Volturi

Sexy

)everyone's reactions were very consistent and great
I like it

rosalie and teddy will be sweet
i love hermikne's friendship with the cullens

I love the house
and I really laughed at luna’s description of the bite
I almost cried laughing and had to take breaks during that part

sad but necessary fight

percy was fun
I'm only happier for each chapter, you're brilliant

Creative

Lovely