great job!

Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, and Patsy? Who the heck is Patsy? I've gone through all my Harry Potter books and I haven't found anyone in there named Patsy. Did you just make up a new character and forget to tell us about it?

Thank you for this great story! Marcus is absolutely awesome! I loved reading the romance between Harry and Marcus, the evolution of their relationship as well as the evolution of their character. I love Sirius and the three boys choose to be his friends. Magnificent end also with this touching marriage. I had a great time. Thank you.

Ame este capitulo muy lindo como quedo todo.

:hearts:

I loved this story. Thank you so much. It was sweet and cute and emotional. Is there going to be more set in this harry/marcus timeline?

I love a good stroy about Flint and Harry! Thank you for sharing!

I know that its finished but an epilogue would be nice. Something about them with children or a final showdown between harry, Marcus, ron, Hermione and Ginny

I'm sad that it ends but loved the wedding scene, I hope your other stories will be just as good as this one.

Harry has his happy ever after.

Marcus will protect Harry.

Why even put in there that there was an out if you weren't going to use it? It's just forcing drama for no reason. Especially since toy didn't have Sirius point it out immediately. Now, if you had it where Dumbledore had hidden Harry away until after the deadline, that'd at least work out, but this was pointless.

DOWN WITH UMBRIDGE! I can honestly say I cheered when I read the end scene. I'm also glad that Harry came clean about what was being done to him. Although I am worried about what the repercussions will be with the death of Umbridge. I can't wait to read more. I also think that the Ministry is full of very dumb people. But I have a feeling Marcus hasn't heard the last of them. I also would think that he'd get some kind of backlash from the widows, Lady Malfoy, and other dark families for his actions. But also some praise from Lady Longbottom. Just some thoughts. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!

This story is amazing. I hope it never ends. I don’t normally leave reviews but I’m going to leave one here. I’ve enjoyed the way you make the characters more complex and have them act in a way that’s appropriate to their ages. I did enjoy the final battle and hope that there are many more chapters to come. I did feel that Voldemort was not the series “big bad” and I hope that means you will be continuing this in arcs. That there will be a focus on what it’s like to have their relationship progress and house politics. Perhaps what Harry goes through as a healer apprentice and how that may work with or conflict against what Marcus does. Shared missions and contracts. There are so many different ways this can continue and I’ll say it again. I truly hope that this story becomes one of those hundred chapter fics with arcs, character development, world building, and an exploration on what ifs.

I love this story! So good! I do wonder though, will Umbridge be the DADA Professor? Will she be as hell bent to discredit Harry and use the blood quill? I can't wait to read more.