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Wonderful chapter. Nice with the creative license giving RBC-Kouhai the ability to fight after getting infected. She was a badass especially for being able to take down an infected NK-Cell. I hope it works out for her in the end.

This shit went real hard bro ngl.

I'm pretty sure 99% of the knowledge here is based off that Ebola video.
A. Dendritic cells don't induce apoptosis. That's the job of the Cytotoxic T and NK cells.
B. Cytokine storms aren't some special super secret move the immune system has. It's an overreaction, just like allergies. It's very, very bad actually. Having too many immune cells in anyone place causes abnormal damage (i.e. the bleeding in ebola patients). Cytokines just signal other immune cells to come to an area.
C. RBCs don't carry viral loads. And even if they did, it wouldn't do anything.
D. Neurons don't randomly send out signals. They have something called an activation potential. It needs to build up a certain amount of "electricity" (simplified) to send out one.
E. Ebola infects (in descending order): fibroblasts, phagocytes(dendritic cells most commonly)
F. We have an Ebola vaccine ;)

Wow. this is an amazing fanfiction. Enthralling. I also watch kurzgesagt. You are a man of culture. Cells at work is so cool

Thank you so much for the chapter.

You do a great job of providing these cells with human characteristics. In real life, microbiology is merciless where it is a bacteria eat bacteria world yet you show these cells acting in human ways even while following their ruthless programming. Like with Regulatory T cell showing a ache on her expression when a fellow immune cell is hurt. This is something the secret sauce that drew me into the show in the first place.

Absolutely agree with your A/N about this being a civil war in the human body. If this had been a bacteria infection instead of a virus infection, the battle would be waged differently. It would be immune system against foreign bacteria instead of the much more saddening immune system vs immune system viruses bring.

Now this next part is fan service so fell free to stop. I would have preferred if during the fight, Dendritic cell damaged Regulatory T cell's receptors on her body. This caused her body (cell) to no longer have Death Receptors, represented by a scar. This could lead to interesting story possibilities with RT cell where she can still perform her job and in some cases, even better now that the virus cannot prematurely kill her. But now that the safety switch on her is permanently turned off, she sees herself (as well as possibly the rest of the immune system) as impure and must be eliminated.

Oh man this was fun to read. Dendritic Cell took down Regulatory T-Cell. Dendritic Cell’s ability to cause immune cells to die is the exact opposite of Helper T-Cells ability to keep immune cells alive for just a little longer.

See you next chapter.

Now I’m not quite sure if the virus is outright corrupting the Macrophages or twisting their already held beliefs. It’s fun to think about either way.

Lady Phi seems to have gotten a different strain of the virus which leaves her with more control over herself and is less hostile than the others.

Lady Em is actively trying to unleash the Cytokine Storm. The main Lymphocytes are going to have to double their combined efforts to take them Dendritic Cell.

I'm a little confused why the narration keeps saying that the infected cells "chose" to leave the light. Even though they are causing damage to the body and need to be eliminated, they didn't choose to get infected. They would never have turned on the body if they hadn't been infected by the virus, something that they never chose in the first place.

It's a tragedy, to be sure, but even though the infected cells seem to keep their sapience, I don't see how they chose to do anything when it's the fault of a virus.

I just have to appreciate the character development that’s done for these characters. And yes! Cytokine Storm!

I think you made a good choice having Lady Macrophage just initiate the fight. It’s down to business. No talking. kill the enemy and be done with it.

Amazing!

This was a very interesting chapter. Nice job!

Thanks for the chapter.

Really like how the Microphage is admitting to her subordinates that this is not an easy threat for her to deal with. No disease is when it targets the very immune system that defends every other system of the human body. It sure is interesting to see this Ebola virus turn the very immune system against itself.

As for your AN about the CCP Coronavirus, I am not to worried. More people are still dying from the flu.

Nice build up. Hope the pay-off is just as good. The battle for the Liver is about to begin.

Keep safe and stay healthy.