Wow such a wonderful reading.
I really like the idea of Ed as a teacher, and the whole tension was so palpable. What a good writing.
Thanks for this piece :D

my goodness, this is such a fantastic story

Fantastic story! It really gives a sense of perspective.

Awesome

Omg I love this! Good job!

omfg this is so beautiful although reading this does not mix well with my current anxiety about university

fantastic story. It captures the dark nature of the story, the eventual maturity of Ed while maintaining his actual personality, and fully creates a moment in time for readers to enjoy.

There is need for another ranger apprentice story

What a good oneshot! I love the way you showed things escalating and Ed's reactions to it, especially since he'd probably react way differently if he were still a teenager. I see post-canon fics that dance around Ed's feelings on the past but never one that highlights his growth since then like you have. I love the way you've subtly shown how everything is going in the future without being explicit about it. Really great job!

This is so perfect!

lovely, and all too resonant.

This was a really amazing journey! Your writing makes for very easy reading and the really interesting premise doesn't hurt at all.

I love the idea of Professor Elric - I think he and Alphonse would both be fantastic teachers, if unconventional. Having tutored, the annoyance of having a student who fits the archetype of the know-it-all kid who has just a bit too much attitude really shines through.

The ending is a wonderful resolution to the whole story. I had no idea where you were going with the circle until you got there but it really did round out the story perfectly.

Micheal or Mik-Kal got more than he bargains for...The teach him about pressing buttons or more or less pressing Ed's buttons. I love that the young ( will be a doctor) college girl asked if Al was okay, after hearing all of that. That was really sweet of her and oh irony has a way of sneak up on you.

This was excellently written and sweet. I've always liked the idea of Ed becoming a teacher.

I love professor Elric, he's clearly well-suited for the job. In particular I found hilarious that his superiors will always complain about his behaviour, no matter what his job is.
On a more serious side, I like the concept of 'closing a circle' and how you portraied it, giving Ed something peaceful to think about.
Very well done, please keep up the good work!