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Great job on this chapter.

Silivia’s semblance is OP. Imagine shooting a Bullet with no mass. That thing would go insanely fast!

good chapter nice too this is back also I wonder what hit them

Truly a masterpiece.

Great work on this chapter!
The fact that Silvia is a Maiden is surprising but makes so much sense now that I think about it...

good chapter also I like the twist and Jaune kicks but

Great job with this chapter.

The wall strategy is a clever idea plot wise.
And these Tyrant Grimm are an interesting concept.

Until next time!

good chapter I like the team is coming together

This is a really interesting story!

The plot is great and the characters well written.
Speaking of which, I very much like Vermillion. And Jaune and the other characters as well. Including the girls of Team BASK. The antagonists are also interesting to read.

I'm looking forward to see more of what you have in mind for this story!

good chapter also I hope to see more in timely manner also let's see how Jaune and co deal with what's coming for them

just read through all of this story yesterday. Awesome story and concept! I really enjoyed reading this so far and hope more comes out :)

You know it's funny but I just realise something. Yang (in fanfiction) rarely end with a guy except Jaune (most of the time she ends up with a girl, Jaune, sometimes an OC), in fact when she is not in the primary pairings she tends to end up alone a lot. Kind of ironic when she is such a flirt and tease. When she is like that alone when all the overs have their family she kind of remind me of Qrow.

good chapter it shows how cold Jaune is we know cares about her but Vermilion is walking in an embodiment of everything that's been taken for him his family his love his chance at a happy life I hope she helps him move on by the end of the fic

Lame Roman? It is a heretical motion to compare that zealot to Flynt Coal