Well, well, well, now the chaos begins... fun times ahead for the quartet.
Awesome as always.

Well, first of all, happy birthday! Hope you had a good one!

Anyway, this chapter mostly featured more setup, as the gang prepared for their plan, plus Tie got some time to talk to everyone about his growth and more about why he wants to go back. Even if it's been a while, it's always nice to see Tie reflect on his past a bit more, and definitely reminds me of how far he's come in the story. Plus, Knit gets to come with! (which, I won't lie, I've been hoping for this whole time)

On a slightly more urgent and less light note, the gang is now wanted and running for their lives. Never having played Nyakuza before, not sure if they'll just run or maybe end up having to fight her, either way it'll be a tense experience for everyone.

CoC - For the sake of not being a broken record, I won't talk about a chapter being short (just want to put out there that it maybe was but I totally understand it being shorter for the setup)
Though, I suppose I don't have any direct critique other than that, so I guess I'll leave this section at that then.

Also quick curiosity, when Hat said “Her deadlines if the real deal.” I'm...unsure what she meant (I'm just going to guess it was "deadlines are the real deal", unless I'm just missing something in the English language.

Next time, it's time for the climax though! Rush Hour time has come, and I couldn't be more excited! That's all though!
Peace!
;D

Uh oh. They've been caught red-handed. It's Rush Hour time!

Great chapter as always !

Ooookay, so apparently Ch34 wasn't the max limit for . Now I know.
Really great job out there, the idea of having an AU that has an entirely new main character is amazing.
I do wish there were less typos though.

A sweet chapter with the four, happy to hear that Knit is gonna travel with the kids back home! Also, I can officially say happy birthday!

I’m also excited to see what will happen next, now that the wraith of the Empress has been activated-

Where can i find the next chapter

Where can I find the next chapter? It seems cut off.

Oh boy i hope this get to yoi two in time but hey hather and tyler its me you pal from another world (even if this verson of you guys dont even know me) i heard through the grapevine yall hit the metro to help i had some of my pals i bribed with cat nip to drop off a package for yall its mostly some rift tokens but i did drop a fan badge in for tie it should help you navagate the metro it needs a certian tie though hope you have it bye!

Nice chapter, but when r u going to update one of the yugioh fanfiction it's been forever since ur last update.

Hey there! Sorry for the late review; The giant robot fight was awesome! And the thought that Thor made them in the reality is interesting-

On to Tie dealing with the Empress and shutting down her offer made me smile too, stick it to the mean ol’ cat lady! It’s also nice to see that Bow and Knit are there to join into the chaos but I worry for them; the Empress is gonna notice them and I’m sure that wont be good.

First off, I used Kyzil Plateau for this chapter, worked 100% like a charm.

Anyway, this chapter was really mostly the fight against the giant dimensional robot. On that front, it was a great time. I think a highlight for me has always been the utilization of the hats/neckwear and how they're creatively used (Best was still Tie vs Voice imo, but thought it was worth mentioning). Still love Hat and Tie's teamwork/dynamic together, makes me smile every time.

And now Bow and Knit are here too, complete with their own snazzy looks. I'm assuming Bow's is her game outfit, which looks great. Now we've got a whole gang, just in time for what I feel is approaching the end of this arc. Looking forward to it

CotC (Crit of the Chapter) - I suppose I could say that Hat's fight with Meowjima was a bit underwhelming? Weird crit, since it clearly wasn't the focus, but I still felt like last chapter was building up to some kind of fight (I also just kinda wanted more Meowjima than we got... :( ). Also, as you mentioned, not a ton of buildup for this boss either, which made it feel kinda...odd and a bit shoehorned in.

Good chapter though, and I'm excited for what's coming next! Like I said, I'm feeling like we're approaching the end of the Nyakuza arc, so I'm anticipating how that'll wrap up (assuming I am correct, and there's not a lot more left or anything).

There's hopefully going to be a direct this month, lots of leakers have been saying that. If not...well I guess Origami King could still be fun?

Peace!
;D

Well, that was intriguing. I imagine you've got something special in store for Rush Hour?
Can't wait.

Yay, new chapter!

Some more fun in Nyakuza this time, nothing of too much note yet. Always sad to see Hat down though. It's like when a puppy is sad, it makes me feel sad too by seeing it happen. Glad that Tie's there to lift her spirits, he's certainly come around from earlier on.

Also can I just mention that Felin is great and I love him. Once Hat and Tie beat up Empress, then he can be a great artist and everyone will love him, best ending.

"You poor fool, there's no escaping her joyousness" is a quote for the ages

Critque of Chapter - I suppose I guess I could say it's short? it still serves its purpose as a setup, but it does cut off somewhat quickly without too much going on. Nothing wrong with that of course, just what came to mind...I kinda suck at critique, huh?

Anyway, next up we're getting the attack of the giant robot which seemingly smashed through into this dimension, which seems pretty bad. Meanwhile Hat is getting mugged, but I'm sure she'll be okay.

Excited for next time though, so I'll be there!
Peace!
;D

A robot? Ooh, now you've got me confused AND interested.
And thank you for the note! I'll be sure to get started on the sequel soon (but I want a small break to go do other things, now's the time to do it.)
I must be sounding a bit like a broken record with these reviews here, but keep it up. Every chapter is great.

This chapter we have a nice little scene with the two, Tie seeing that not even Hat is invincible. She still seems to be struggling, but I know they’re gonna make it through because friendship! Speaking about friendship, Hat is also trying to get through to Felin as well- new companion perhaps?

And the new flair for the pendant is really neat! I wonder, was it inspired be something? It feels familiar somehow.