Beautiful story idea and greatly executed! The format (e.g. "Boom", "Crashis definetly something new, but you managed to convinced me with that. Though I must say, I'm a little confused with the "!".
Looking forward to more!

Interesting story so far! I wanna see what happens next XD

was doubtful about the concept, but thankfully I was wrong

Interesting.

Great start to this story! I'm intrigued!