love it want to see more and I love that it's in third person

Please ben x charmcaster

Loved it! Great start. I liked the changes you made here. And I'm looking foward to see Ben's Loboan instincts starting to cause some trouble. I'm up for any pairing you want to try.

It's a great story with good grammer, so I don't want you to quit after the first chapter.

This is interesting, but hoping you might do a different pairing other than Been, hoping for Ben x Charmcaster tbh