A fanfic hasn't made me cry like this in awhile. Really really beautiful.

This was truly an enjoyable read. I can only imagine if Wyatt were seriously injured this would be what would happen. No matter what happened he would want to know her. You ending really got me - “There she is - real, persistent, far greater than any fragile myth or work of the imagination. He knows her. He loves her. He's always coming home to her. There's actually no such thing as home without her, and no labyrinth, no loss of his internal compass, could ever interfere with the signal that guides his heart back to hers.“

OMG! this is amazing

Wow. Just wow. When I started the story, I wasn't sure where it was going. If Wyatt was having a bad dream, or something like that. And then BAM! Plot twist and amazing feels. This was great!

I really enjoyed this. The lineThere's no version of this story that ends differently, okay?' is absolute perfection.

Oh I loved this! Especially the way their relationship unfolded piece by piece as Wyatt remembered. Thank you for a great one shot

Ommgggggggggg this is one of the most beautiful fic I've ever read! I loved it sooooo much! Thank you! Guh! I'm such a sucker for super-injured-somebody fic...

‘He only knows his name when she says it.’ This killed me. It’s so beautiful - the whole piece exposing Wyatt’s love so raw and needy and vulnerable. And if stuff like this is bouncing around in your head, please continue to write it for us. I love this.

Well that was unexpected... So descriptive and emotional. I love ‘count up all the chances’ but I’m glad you wrote this too :) lyatt is life

Damn! This is so different and so good. Too bad we cannot see the recovery but great one shot

I don't know what to say. Whatever it would be, it won't be good enough to describe how extraordinary your writing is! I COULD NOT HAVE LOVED THIS MORE!

This beautiful little story almost broke my heart but fortunately it ended well. It’s fate for those two. Even though I agree with Lucy and don’t believe in that kind of thing. It’s so gorgeous.

Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh.

Wow, you are really spoiling us here! This is so moving. I love the way the state of their lives is slowly revealed as Wyatt regains his memories, the heartbreak when Lucy goes away, the frustration with Rufus, it's all so good. Would love to know what Rufus's 'bizarre questions' were!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us once again.

So a few paragraphs in, I'm suddenly reminded of your "Je t'aime" -though it's been months since I read it, memories of it still catch me off-guard at random points in my life and make my eyes well with tears-which is one thing when I'm alone doing laundry, and quite another when you're in a work meeting. Anyway-I was seriously concerned you were going to take a page from that one for this story-at one point I even told myself to stop reading because I was already crying in anticipation of what might happen, and I knew it would get worse...but I just couldn't stop! So I kept reading, and I definitely cried...but thankfully they eventually became happy tears! Thank you so much for this! Although now I think I'm emotionally exhausted!

PS - Can we all agree that Wyatt has done more than enough for his country and the world, and that after they beat RH, he gets to either leave the military or stay in some capacity that does NOT include deployment to dangerous places? If we could just all agree on that, I'll feel much better!

Oh-as far as specific feedback goes-loved the way you wrote his internal thoughts at varying levels of confusion; loved but really hated his thoughts when Rufus/Jiya made Lucy go to her conference and leave...and loved that car as his 'golden ticket'!