Great story!

The story was entertaining but difficult to follow and a bit disjointed. It was not always obvious who was speaking. Ray's character being ill was difficult to swallow because he was a strong force in Ana's life in the original FSoG. Thanks for posting. Looking forward for more fanfiction from you.

wow amazing story cant wait to read more update soon please

I like this outtake, it is the one missing in the story. Thank you for sharing your stories.

Ana sounds like a bitch to Christian and expects others should have the love and care that she have for Lucas. It sounds like she also had problems growing up.

This was a very heart tugging chapter about a child dying. Ana was very distraught and the only person there for her at this emotional time was Christian who held her and just gave her space to overcome her grief.

Whose the dom now?

Good HEA for them and they have gotten so close together and can say anything appropriate to each other without reservation. Communication is the key to a lasting loving relationship. Thank you.

Christian and Ana had a fast turnaround back to the hospital after a quickie. What is this Kate trying to restart a gone by crush of yesterday. People grow up and change and what is in her mind is not the sane as others.

What did Christian see? Just two acquaintances fooling around. Hope he is not jealous.

This is cute and fun chapter with Ray taking care of his business and daughter Ana in the care of Christian Grey. The malingering Ana got help from daddy dearest .

Ana is stubborn and Christian just wants to prove he's a good boyfriend. She's actually very smart in her work. So glad Hyde and Roach are dismissed! Like Christian, have confidence in Ana leading SIP. Thank you for both outtakes and the very long C7. Xo daytona

Lucas was Ana's anchor. She needs to let Christian takes over because he wants to, very much. Let him be her Prince. He's changed so much, just for her. In a way, Ana's blessed to have Lucas and now Christian. Thank you for the great outtake and your time. Xo daytona

They have click and Christian is ana's support system now that she is in need, with Ray having a heart attack and an ongoing procedure.

Christian Never Lets Ana Down. He's always by her side to let her lean on him and support her. As in after Ray's admittance to hospital, he's always there. Him just being there for her is enough. I'll like to assume Ray recovers well that Ana is carefree for the proposal hiking trip. Like Ana, was dying to know where the ring was. I like a very excited Ana who can't wait to find and have the ring put on her finger by Christian. If she could very minimal contact with Carla and Sally. Carla proves she doesn't have Ana's back till the end only Sally's. Sally is such a brat. And no more allowance or paying her credit card bills by Christian, Ana should forbid it. Thank you for the great and very long chapter. Thank you for writing an amazing story. Xo daytona