Reviews for The Storm
I'mAlsoAWe chapter 8 . 6/13
Love it!
woofyy chapter 8 . 4/18
Nice story. I thought it escalated quickly in the first few chapters but I'm glad you didnt make them do the deed so soon. The characters were a little OOC. For example, it's hard to imagine a proper lady like Erina swearing. Also, Ishiki, Kuga and Rindo are a year and 2 above Soma and Erina and the rest of them so it's odd for them to graduate all at the same time. If Soma and Erina are in their last year and were going to graduate in a couple of months, those 3 shouldn't be in the elite 10 because they would have graduated a year ago or so. It's also weird that you included Rindo but didn't include Eishi Tsuaka when they're in the same year and he was the previous first seat. It's also nice to see Hayama get together with Hisoko and that Megumigot over Soma and found her happy ending with Takumi. I was hoping you'd write something about Ryo and Alice getting together too. Overall, it was a nice story to read. Good luck with your future stories. I hope you'll write more stories about Soma and Erina because they make a cute couple :).
L chapter 8 . 4/6
Gosh, this is fantastic. The whole story. The way you developted their feelings for each other and everything only happened because of that blessed storm! Ah, how fate works beautifully for these two! I love the fact that Megumi was able to realize what she truly felt for Soma and move on with her love life with Takumi. They're honestly adorable. I'm also really glad Erina grew up as a person and let herself enjoy the pleasures of life with a certain redhead! Ugh, Soma is so soft with her, I can't. Their competitiveness was spot on and literally everything about this is amazing. Thank you so much for dedicating your time to this! Honestly this is incredible.
Live Your Life chapter 8 . 4/1
I love this story! Wish this could be animated tho xD. Keep up with the great work. God bless you :)
Live Your Life chapter 8 . 4/1
I love this so much. Thanks for the lovely story! Keep up with the good work! God bless you bro. :) Souma x Erina till the end!
cc chapter 8 . 3/28
LOved this story
Damn chapter 5 . 3/28
why Megumi stealing their photos, damn mind you're own business.
Aizen chapter 8 . 12/22/2019
this is very beautiful thanks for the story
Imadogperson chapter 8 . 11/13/2019
*Claps once**Breathes in deeply through nose*YES!
That was amazing, and I'm glad I got to read it. It was really well written, and I couldn't have asked for anything more. Thank you.
Story Weaver1 chapter 8 . 10/2/2019
The Megumi/Takumi is indeed adorable. I can just see the part in the auction in all shojou bubbles and sparkles. I also like how their ending contrasts with Soma and Erina's; meeting his parents and helping at his restaurant vs competing with each other as they travel. It's fantastic foil for underscoring.
Story Weaver1 chapter 7 . 9/25/2019
Linking one thing to another; how clever of Soma.
Story Weaver1 chapter 6 . 9/25/2019
Megumi's scene with Takumi was sweet and cute; a subtle and comforting thing like her food.

The motorcycle ritual was too. The migraine thing was unexpected, but I guess that fits with migraines in general, right?
Story Weaver1 chapter 5 . 9/24/2019
Poor Megumi. That was a reader-feels-punch there, particularly after such a light and WAFFy date for Erina.
Story Weaver1 chapter 4 . 9/16/2019
The bigger focus on personal goals and emotions makes this a great chapter in my opinion. Things were sliding a little too close to lust for my tastes last time but this shows something closer to love, with its showings of support and patience and concern for the other.
Story Weaver1 chapter 2 . 9/11/2019
I agree with Soma, Erina's tsundere in this chapter really is the cutest.
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